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Humanity ,a ....

we're set on turing Earth into a living HELL

2 total reviews 
Comment from Regina Elliott
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A lot of people have turned
away from God, they think
they can live without Him
but they can't. I think there is
more violence and hatred
than ever. Good luck in the
contest, superior penning.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
    Yes lots of people have lost their faith due to all the scandals the Vatican has been involved in

    Other think it?s cool to mock God and say He doesn?t exist .

    The Devil is thriving

    We only have to see the mess we are in today to understand without God and his guidance , we are lost ? killing our own kind for power and greed.

    Thank you for reviewing my wee poem.

    Keep safe!
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

you might want to recheck the rules for this competition. You've got the syllables down fine but the second stipulation is that it must rhyme and this one doesn't.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
    Ooppppsss, thanks for the helpful feedback .. I will edit .

    I missed the last line of the requirements.( biggrin)

    Keep safe!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
    I edited .. my subtitle became my poem and the original poem my subtitle .. what do you think?
reply by giraffmang on 26-Mar-2022
    That's so much better
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
    Thank you ! ( Smiles)