Through the Years
A tanka for the picture this club challenge15 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely Tanka interpretation of this colourful picture for the Picture This club, June. Nicely presented too with the blue text.I like the fact that nothing's changed through the seasons, their love remains strong.
Nicely interpreted,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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A lovely Tanka interpretation of this colourful picture for the Picture This club, June. Nicely presented too with the blue text.I like the fact that nothing's changed through the seasons, their love remains strong.
Nicely interpreted,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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A strong foundation of love can certainly help us weather any challenges life throws at us. Seasons come and go. Love remains. Glad you enjoyed this tanka.
Comment from dragonpoet
June,
This poem is a through and beautiful description of the artwork for the picture this promppt. It shows the power of love.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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June,
This poem is a through and beautiful description of the artwork for the picture this promppt. It shows the power of love.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insights on this tanka. We all change as we journey through life, just like the seasons do. It's only natural. But relationships based on a strong foundation can weather any change or challenge - and flourish.
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You?re welcome and you?re so right, June
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Rain can indeed make everything look shiny and we often miss the beauty in rain as we think of it as a nuisance, but you brought the beauty to life here June, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Rain can indeed make everything look shiny and we often miss the beauty in rain as we think of it as a nuisance, but you brought the beauty to life here June, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thank you for sharing your sentiments. Seasons change and it has its own unique beauty - adding to the joys of our journey through life.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your tanks is in great form, June. I like the way it perfectly describes long lasting love. Yes, the world may change around the couple, but their love remains as strong as that of the first day.
Thanks for participating.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Your tanks is in great form, June. I like the way it perfectly describes long lasting love. Yes, the world may change around the couple, but their love remains as strong as that of the first day.
Thanks for participating.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Yes, love is the foundation of any relationship and is strong enough to weather changes and challenges on our journey through life. Thank you for sharing your insights. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Comment from kahpot
Beautiful, yes come rain or shine true love will always last, love the words and the presentation as the words give the impression of rain, an excellent Tanka for the challenge****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Beautiful, yes come rain or shine true love will always last, love the words and the presentation as the words give the impression of rain, an excellent Tanka for the challenge****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Yes, love is the foundation of any relationship and is strong enough to weather changes and challenges on our journey through life. Thank you for sharing your insights. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork to write about with a good presentation, June.
-You wrote a good tanka with a good topic.
-Effective imagery sets the scene in the opening lines.
-A good pivot line.
-Very good use of color imagery in the
concluding lines, along with the message
that nothing is different between these
people except the "color of the leaves."
-Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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-Nice artwork to write about with a good presentation, June.
-You wrote a good tanka with a good topic.
-Effective imagery sets the scene in the opening lines.
-A good pivot line.
-Very good use of color imagery in the
concluding lines, along with the message
that nothing is different between these
people except the "color of the leaves."
-Well done.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Yes, love is the foundation of any relationship and is strong enough to weather changes and challenges on our journey through life. Thank you for sharing your insights. Your feedback is much appreciated.
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You are very welcome, June, and I appreciate your reply.
Comment from nomi338
When love is real the only things that should be allowed to change are exterior things over which you have no control. Having the ability to control your emotions means that anger, jealousy and the like, should never be given a place in your lives.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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When love is real the only things that should be allowed to change are exterior things over which you have no control. Having the ability to control your emotions means that anger, jealousy and the like, should never be given a place in your lives.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Yes, love is the foundation of any relationship and is strong enough to weather changes and challenges on our journey through life. Thank you for sharing your insights. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your use of personification will draw the reader in to identify. Nature is a reminder, kind and painful that things are always changing, sometimes in a beautiful way and others, in a not so pretty way. It's just the way of it. Well expressed.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Your use of personification will draw the reader in to identify. Nature is a reminder, kind and painful that things are always changing, sometimes in a beautiful way and others, in a not so pretty way. It's just the way of it. Well expressed.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insights on this tanka. We all change as we journey through life, just like the seasons do. It's only natural. But relationships based on a strong foundation can weather any change or challenge - and flourish.
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***hugs***
Comment from Teri7
June, This is a very beautiful and very well written Tanka poem you have penned to go with the art work for the club challenge. You used very good descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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June, This is a very beautiful and very well written Tanka poem you have penned to go with the art work for the club challenge. You used very good descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insights on this tanka. We all change as we journey through life, just like the seasons do. It's only natural. But relationships based on a strong foundation can weather any change or challenge - and flourish.
Comment from juliaSjames
A lovely tanka June. I really like this form although I haven't written one for a long while.
Yours is beautifully composed as an ekphrastic write. I love the line " hearts and hands joined together". The pivot is perfect, the keystone of the write.
Indeed, true love weathers all seasons..
Thanks for sharing this excellent response to the challenge
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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A lovely tanka June. I really like this form although I haven't written one for a long while.
Yours is beautifully composed as an ekphrastic write. I love the line " hearts and hands joined together". The pivot is perfect, the keystone of the write.
Indeed, true love weathers all seasons..
Thanks for sharing this excellent response to the challenge
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insights on this tanka. We all change as we journey through life, just like the seasons do. It's only natural. But relationships based on a strong foundation can weather any change or challenge - and flourish.
