Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

That is pure dedication to everything, but love and marriage. Quality time with loved one is important. I hope you set regualar vacations. So rigid. Nice work :)

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022

Thanks, Sunnilicious.

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

'Need Twenty Five Hours a Day', is short, succinct and thought-provoking. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it is. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you got on?

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022

Came in dead last. Thank you for giving this a look.

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 31-Mar-2022

Bill, it's often the way things go.
the Duchess

Comment from Mia Twysted

Good

There are not enough hours in the day sometimes when you are writing. However, if we had more hours we would still have the same issues. That is just life.

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022

Well, that*s just great. : )

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

You made me chuckle with this poem. Love the idea of eight hours of reading and writing, eight hours of sleeping and eight hours of working. So, no wonder we are a busy person.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022

Thanks, Rosemary

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Sad but true. That's what normally is on my daily agenda. I hope you are the exception, young and vibrant for most of what I read are nearing the age of octogenarians.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022

Thanks, Tom. Halfway between sixty and seventy.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 25 Words writing prompt contest. Good word count. I like the presentation.

Haha...very clever. I never thought about a day divided into 3 parts. I used to spend all day reviewing and writing but I can't do it now...I'm too busy.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022

Thanks, Gypsy

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Yes, it has become like that. Not sure when the housework, cooking and shopping is meant to get done ... maybe that's the "working" bit. Great entry and well-chosen image - best wishes.
Wendy

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022

Thanks, Wendy

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I love how you divide your time here and you made me smile, there are just not enough hours in the day to do all we need to do and I for one would welcome an extra hour per day! A fun write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022

Thanks, Dolly

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

With these well-chosen and effectively used twenty-five words, you have probably described the schedules of many Fan Story members. Point succinctly conveyed

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022

Thanks, Janice.

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022

Thanks, Janice.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

I like the message behind these words, though I think you have used twenty six words, you may need to count them-unless you are counting twenty-four as one, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022

Hyphenated words count as one. : )