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Comment from karenina
I've not ever seen this challenge. Seventy-eight words! The concept of writing about God while not naming a particular religion and avoiding the "common" fallback words while inserting the mandated ones seems like quite a task. Not to worry. You did it!
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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I've not ever seen this challenge. Seventy-eight words! The concept of writing about God while not naming a particular religion and avoiding the "common" fallback words while inserting the mandated ones seems like quite a task. Not to worry. You did it!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Yes, so many rules about what you must include and must not include as well as word length. I remember it being a challenge. Such a lovely review - thank you. Wendy
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This was a quite complex set of parameters! You made it seem spontaneous and not formulaic at all?
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Congratulations on your well deserved win, Wendy, I think it's non-fiction, and well told, too. You used the words you were allowed to have in your story, and actually came up with a wonderful message. Not forced, and made so much good sense. Well done! :) Sandra
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Congratulations on your well deserved win, Wendy, I think it's non-fiction, and well told, too. You used the words you were allowed to have in your story, and actually came up with a wonderful message. Not forced, and made so much good sense. Well done! :) Sandra
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you Sandra! Great review. I entered because I have an objection to people writing "fiction" about God which distorts His character. So I write the truth as I see it, but acknowledge that it may be classified as fiction by some people. I am glad you appreciated it and knew it as truth as well.
Wendy
Comment from LisaMay
Congratulations on winning this prompt. Within the framework of its convoluted rules, you have delivered the simplicity of belief in God and its determination of our destiny.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Congratulations on winning this prompt. Within the framework of its convoluted rules, you have delivered the simplicity of belief in God and its determination of our destiny.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much. I still question myself about entering, but I feel it is deceitful to tell lies about God's character under the guise of "fiction", and I wanted to make a point. I appreciate your review.
Wendy
Comment from Raul1
Congratulations on winning the contest! I am proud of you! I like very much your God's Test of Living story. It is beautiful and wonderful. Exceptional work! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Congratulations on winning the contest! I am proud of you! I like very much your God's Test of Living story. It is beautiful and wonderful. Exceptional work! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you Raul - and congratulations to you on placing second. The voting was very close. Many thanks for your six stars as well, I appreciate this honour greatly. It's very generous and kind of you.
Wendy
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You're welcome and thank you, my friend! I am happy!
Comment from Bill Schott
This seventy-eight-word story, Father, uses all the words, does all the other stuff, and magnifies the power and presence an Almighty God.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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This seventy-eight-word story, Father, uses all the words, does all the other stuff, and magnifies the power and presence an Almighty God.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you Bill. I appreciate your insightful review.
Wendy
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written contest entry you have penned. You used very good descriptive and very true words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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This is a very well written contest entry you have penned. You used very good descriptive and very true words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much Teri. Your review is thoughtful and encouraging. Thanks too for your good wishes.
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you are so welcome!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the God's Test of Living 78 Word writing prompt contest.
Your poem is very clear and to the point.
God is all Knowing and powerful.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the God's Test of Living 78 Word writing prompt contest.
Your poem is very clear and to the point.
God is all Knowing and powerful.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your thoughtful review and good wishes!
Comment from LJbutterfly
There are many names that describe God. You have adequately described three of the most popular, beginning with the prefix "omni," meaning "all, every, or whole." To me, the most important is Omnipotent. Depending on our earthly choices, God determines our eternal fate. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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There are many names that describe God. You have adequately described three of the most popular, beginning with the prefix "omni," meaning "all, every, or whole." To me, the most important is Omnipotent. Depending on our earthly choices, God determines our eternal fate. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your lovely review and good wishes. All are greatly appreciated.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You are so correct in stating that God is everywhere. I think you also like writing about him in your stories. I for one like telling and explaining about the things He does for His people.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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You are so correct in stating that God is everywhere. I think you also like writing about him in your stories. I for one like telling and explaining about the things He does for His people.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your lovely review. And yes, you are right. His true character of love needs to be clearly shown.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
If I had a six star left to give, I would give it to you in a minute! No truer words have ever been spoken! This is breathtaking & beautiful, and I truly enjoyed reading it!
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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If I had a six star left to give, I would give it to you in a minute! No truer words have ever been spoken! This is breathtaking & beautiful, and I truly enjoyed reading it!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much Debi. I am honoured that you would consider six stars. I greatly appreciate your review.
