One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your presentation is great, Gypsy. I love the image and color scheme. Your words tell a poignant story of one who is still in love with one who has gone for possibly unfaithfulness on the part of one or both of the couple. Your words create great imagery.
Thanks for the notes, too.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Your presentation is great, Gypsy. I love the image and color scheme. Your words tell a poignant story of one who is still in love with one who has gone for possibly unfaithfulness on the part of one or both of the couple. Your words create great imagery.
Thanks for the notes, too.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Jan, for your review and feedback, I appreciate it. Best wishes.
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Comment from jessizero
This poem was beautiful. Music can bring back things and people long gone. Thank you for sharing this poem here. Keep up the good work. Once again, best wishes.
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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This poem was beautiful. Music can bring back things and people long gone. Thank you for sharing this poem here. Keep up the good work. Once again, best wishes.
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Jessi, for your review and feedback, I appreciate it. Best wishes.
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Comment from Sugarray77
Gypsy... you have written an excellent FreeVerse that is so moving to your reader. We can all relate to that angst and deep feeling of loss that your poem portrays. Well done!
Melissa
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Gypsy... you have written an excellent FreeVerse that is so moving to your reader. We can all relate to that angst and deep feeling of loss that your poem portrays. Well done!
Melissa
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Melissa, your exceptional review and six stars mean so much to me because you are definitely an expert.
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