Unfair Advantage
15 Syllable contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Not a fan of short poems but this one made me chuckle immediately, and is well-written, spot on and could very well take first place... unless we have a "woke" generation entered for they will object.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Not a fan of short poems but this one made me chuckle immediately, and is well-written, spot on and could very well take first place... unless we have a "woke" generation entered for they will object.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Yeah, I'm surprised I haven't had a few death threats over it yet. Haha. Thank you for the great review and giant sixer, Tom. I'm glad at least a couple people got a chuckle out of it. I'm glad you liked this silliness, friend. Thank you again. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from LisaMay
Ooh you are naughty and controversial. Having a 'rudder' doesn't necessarily dick-tate that Lia should win every swim event. Depending on its size, there might be a considerable degree of drag.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Ooh you are naughty and controversial. Having a 'rudder' doesn't necessarily dick-tate that Lia should win every swim event. Depending on its size, there might be a considerable degree of drag.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Hahahaha. This review simply deserves a nomination. Thank you for the hilarious review and belly laugh, Lisa. I needed that. LOL
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Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, you made me smile here. I did look her up and understood fully, a fine write, I wish you luck with the contest, Lia sounds like a formidable woman! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Ha ha ha, you made me smile here. I did look her up and understood fully, a fine write, I wish you luck with the contest, Lia sounds like a formidable woman! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Lol. Yes, besides her rudder, she is quite 'formidable' compared to the other women contestants. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and gracious stars, Dolly. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 15 syllable writing prompt entry, you executed it well, hilarious. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 15 syllable writing prompt entry, you executed it well, hilarious. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the great review, 13. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
