A Fifty Year Love Story
And some said it would never last47 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Congratulations on your deep love of many years. I enjoyed reading your well thought out contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllables are correct per line, and the image is beautiful. I see you and your significant other entwined in the image like the vines.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
Congratulations on your deep love of many years. I enjoyed reading your well thought out contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllables are correct per line, and the image is beautiful. I see you and your significant other entwined in the image like the vines.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Thank you Jan! I appreciate your very kind & encouraging review!
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Comment from Mary Vigasin
A wonderful and loving poem in tribute not only to your love but to you also as you shared 50 years together.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
A wonderful and loving poem in tribute not only to your love but to you also as you shared 50 years together.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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II thank you so much Mary, for the lovely review of my poem, and the kind words of encouragement!
Comment from Anne Johnston
"The love of a child
More precious than any gem
A gift from above"
Your words are so true, a child's love is so precious. Great picture you have chosen to illustrate.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
"The love of a child
More precious than any gem
A gift from above"
Your words are so true, a child's love is so precious. Great picture you have chosen to illustrate.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Thank you so very much, Anne for your kind review!
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You are welcome
Comment from Eternal Muse
That is precious. A child's love is sacred indeed, a true gift from above.
Beautiful imagery and visuals and I love the artwork. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
That is precious. A child's love is sacred indeed, a true gift from above.
Beautiful imagery and visuals and I love the artwork. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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I thank you so very much for your kind review & kind words!
Comment from Jane Jane King
Lovely poem and so true...the love of a child brings such joy...Beautiful little girl, by the way.Is she a relative? Thanks so much for sharing. Very uplifting words.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
Lovely poem and so true...the love of a child brings such joy...Beautiful little girl, by the way.Is she a relative? Thanks so much for sharing. Very uplifting words.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Thank you Jane, for your very kind review! Yes she is my granddaughter,
Aren't kids delightful?
Comment from Cecilia R
Your poem is very sweet. Yes, there is nothing like the love of a child. The picture is perfect in showing the innocence to compliment your words. Good luck on the contest.
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
Your poem is very sweet. Yes, there is nothing like the love of a child. The picture is perfect in showing the innocence to compliment your words. Good luck on the contest.
Cecilia
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Cecilia, you brightened my day! Thank you for your kind review! You are so sweet!
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
You just said a mouth full, and some with this write. But for one to know that, they would have to know how to love self. Therefore, when the reproduction mirrors your reflection, you will love unconditionally. Keep Writing
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
You just said a mouth full, and some with this write. But for one to know that, they would have to know how to love self. Therefore, when the reproduction mirrors your reflection, you will love unconditionally. Keep Writing
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Thank you so very much for such kind words and review! You are awesome, my friend!