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Football - A Novel

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A mother faces life's struggles.

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Sounds like a good idea. Just probably when she gets through the episodes of chemotherapy they will have a reception like no other they have been to...

 Comment Written 01-May-2022


reply by the author on 02-May-2022
    Thank you for reading this. I appreciate.
Comment from Pantygynt
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As an exercise in writing an epilogue this is great stuff. Congratulations on doing something you had no intention of doing and doing it quite superbly.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
    Thank you. I still have a few upset reviewers. LOL
Comment from amahra
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LOL you are a trip. Well, that's one way of getting out of it. Blame it on the characters. I gotcha. That was very clever. Even though, I too complained. You have the right to end your story as you see fit. It was a great story. Hope Katherine and Gabriel live happily ever after...and cancer free.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
    LOL Another epilogue may be coming, but don't know.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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It's like an emptiness sets in after characters we've grown close to are gone, or on to a new chapter in their lives. But not everything is permanent in life, so I'm figuring that you'll find a reason to carry on the story. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
    Thank you. We'll see what Katherine and Gabriel come up with.
Comment from Sanku
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Sometimes no epilogue is best .That way the reader can imagine the continuation as per his/her fancy .Of course we will honour their privacy and we will be here if and when they want to share their life with us.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
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Yes, I too was hoping for an epilogue to see how they are going. That's because they seemed such real and authentic people, friends. I will wait patiently until the right time for them to share how they are. Thank you!! I am sure everyone enjoyed their story which you brought to life.
Wendy

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
    Thank you. We'll see what Katherine and Gabriel come up with.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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This is a clever way to address the request of writing an epilogue. As writer's, I think we perfect our craft through the experience of the stories we tell. I appreciate you sharing that your character's guide you to the end.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
    Thank you.
Comment from Ben Colder
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I appreciate the epilog and appreciate the character's wishing to be left alone. It is time for such. No doubt for the family to get to know each other. As always, I have enjoyed your stories.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
    Thank you.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork, barbara.
-This came as a big surprise.
-It just shows how well you
did with the book because we all loved it.
-Hopefully, Gabe and Katherine will
work things out. They are wonderful
characters, along with the children and their
friends and co-workers.
-Good luck with whatever you decide to do.
-Until then, I will look forward to their future.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
    Thank you.
reply by Pam (respa) on 03-Apr-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Jay Squires
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Now I am wondering if I missed the last chapter. I know it was slotting itself into position for an ending, but I wasn't aware that it had arrived yet. Obviously, it has. I for one will honor the couple's request for privacy, leaving them with a grateful thank-you for including me in the private moments that led up to the ending. Their lives have become a part of me, and I have grown by sharing them. I shall await the epilogue, if it comes.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
    Thank you. I don't think you missed anything. We'll see what Katherine and Gabriel come up with.