A Place of Contentment
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem with a great flow and rhyme scheme.
Majestic ridges wrapped in mist --wild mountain flora at my feet.A Warbler sings, a Cardinal calls with melodies both loud and sweet. Very lovely presentation. Photo compliments your words well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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This is a nicely written poem with a great flow and rhyme scheme.
Majestic ridges wrapped in mist --wild mountain flora at my feet.A Warbler sings, a Cardinal calls with melodies both loud and sweet. Very lovely presentation. Photo compliments your words well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you Joanne for your thoughtful and encouraging review. Thank you too for sharing the parts you especially liked and for the special sixth star.
Blessings
Janet
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Your welcome
Comment from Boogienights
Truly being with the one you love is the best contentment you can have. Every beautiful thing you describe can't possibly be as wonderful as love. Thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Truly being with the one you love is the best contentment you can have. Every beautiful thing you describe can't possibly be as wonderful as love. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from jake cosmos aller
Nice springtime poem about life, changes, nature, beauty, love, contentment, flowers, birds, and animals. I like your word choices. I can feel spring in the poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Nice springtime poem about life, changes, nature, beauty, love, contentment, flowers, birds, and animals. I like your word choices. I can feel spring in the poem. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you Jake for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Aussie
A Rhyming poem contest and yet I can't work out your rhyming? Every second line? Must be a type I haven't seen before. I loved it. Your poem made me feel all warm and fuzzy. We need more of this type of writing. The world is a dark place. This lifted my spirits. K xx
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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A Rhyming poem contest and yet I can't work out your rhyming? Every second line? Must be a type I haven't seen before. I loved it. Your poem made me feel all warm and fuzzy. We need more of this type of writing. The world is a dark place. This lifted my spirits. K xx
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you Aussie for your thoughtful and encouraging review. This one is written in iambic tetrameter and ABCB rhyme meaning that the 2nd and 4th lines must rhyme. I love this form. It seems to work best for me. So pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' A Place of Contentment', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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' A Place of Contentment', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you duchess for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Janet, my never met friend, you're more the welcome.
Bless you and stay safe,
the Duchess
Comment from Eugenette Morin
A beautiful sense of serenity and peace comes from this iambic tetrameter. It is the perfect device to bring about a sense of comfort and contentment. Well done
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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A beautiful sense of serenity and peace comes from this iambic tetrameter. It is the perfect device to bring about a sense of comfort and contentment. Well done
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you Eugenette for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from nomi338
Given such idyllic settings I could fall in love with someone I did not care for that much beforehand. You get a sense of what the Garden of Eden must have looked like back in the beginning. Which in turn makes you wonder how they could have so easily given it all up for a bite of forbidden fruit. Eat an orange or a peach for crying out loud.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Given such idyllic settings I could fall in love with someone I did not care for that much beforehand. You get a sense of what the Garden of Eden must have looked like back in the beginning. Which in turn makes you wonder how they could have so easily given it all up for a bite of forbidden fruit. Eat an orange or a peach for crying out loud.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you Nomi for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I always look forward to your insightful reviews.
Blessings
Janet
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I am partial to apples and oranges personally.
Comment from E. Denison
Wonderful, lyrical entry for the rhyming poetry contest, Janet. This is beautifully penned. The imagery is striking, and your word choice is careful and greatly appreciated (. . . we don't often see bucolic, verdant, and saffron on this site, particularly not within the same work). Thank you for sharing; best of luck in the competition!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Wonderful, lyrical entry for the rhyming poetry contest, Janet. This is beautifully penned. The imagery is striking, and your word choice is careful and greatly appreciated (. . . we don't often see bucolic, verdant, and saffron on this site, particularly not within the same work). Thank you for sharing; best of luck in the competition!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you E for your thoughtful and encouraging review. Thank you too for your kind comments and for the special sixth star.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written poem, about the glory of this created world, that speaks of optimism, good tidings, that beauty is normal, unlike the alternative, beautifully written dear Janet, your work is always consistently good, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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A beautifully written poem, about the glory of this created world, that speaks of optimism, good tidings, that beauty is normal, unlike the alternative, beautifully written dear Janet, your work is always consistently good, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you Roy for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from you my friend.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Janet. This is a lovely poem of contentment and it carries an aura of peacefulness as you describe your "happy" place. I enjoyed it very much and feel the touch of the beautiful iambic rhythm in each line. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Hello Janet. This is a lovely poem of contentment and it carries an aura of peacefulness as you describe your "happy" place. I enjoyed it very much and feel the touch of the beautiful iambic rhythm in each line. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you Melissa for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
