Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Awake with Longing"Romantic Tanka Poems
7 total reviews
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Yes a 'tight' and gentle hug' sounds wonderful just now. I am afraid we oldies don't get a lot of those. Absolutely beautiful presentation with the Oriental picture you chose. It's perfect for my taste..Giddy
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Yes a 'tight' and gentle hug' sounds wonderful just now. I am afraid we oldies don't get a lot of those. Absolutely beautiful presentation with the Oriental picture you chose. It's perfect for my taste..Giddy
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and six stars! I appreciate your time and feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was definitely an interesting and romantic Tanka poem, Gypsy. I enjoyed the different colors of font that you used. Your words showed a longing of a partner, who showed love. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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This was definitely an interesting and romantic Tanka poem, Gypsy. I enjoyed the different colors of font that you used. Your words showed a longing of a partner, who showed love. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr, I always appreciate your kind and helpful reviews. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome, Gypsy, blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
There is a dreaminess about your words. Your reader has has when reading your beautifully written words. I enjoyed the read and as usual beautifully presented.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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There is a dreaminess about your words. Your reader has has when reading your beautifully written words. I enjoyed the read and as usual beautifully presented.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, . I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem - Nice presentation - Nice Tanka Poem - Progressive in thought and time - apparently awake in the moment feeling the components of the hug - tight, gentle, combined with the emotion it produced - then in the second part of the poem, the contrast - remembering the experience - daydreaming about lips and eyes. Good job in bringing forth the intended emotion in the poem.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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I like your poem - Nice presentation - Nice Tanka Poem - Progressive in thought and time - apparently awake in the moment feeling the components of the hug - tight, gentle, combined with the emotion it produced - then in the second part of the poem, the contrast - remembering the experience - daydreaming about lips and eyes. Good job in bringing forth the intended emotion in the poem.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, AP. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like it that you use Japanese paintings for the Japanese poems. I like the format and content of this longing for love poem. I especially like the word "aquamarine".
Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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I like it that you use Japanese paintings for the Japanese poems. I like the format and content of this longing for love poem. I especially like the word "aquamarine".
Well done.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Lisa. I love this painter too and I use them for tanka-- ikenaga yasunari -- click here
Gypsy hugs
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Thanks for the idea and the name of the artist. I will take the challenge then.
Hugs.
Comment from Raul1
It is clear and concise. You have written well your poem. It's beautifully written. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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It is clear and concise. You have written well your poem. It's beautifully written. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your review.
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----racy little ditty, no? I seem to remember this feeling years ago in the swirling mists of time, but it's been so long, maybe not?
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----racy little ditty, no? I seem to remember this feeling years ago in the swirling mists of time, but it's been so long, maybe not?
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Mike :) yes, it's for the Japanese Poetry Club. It's supposed to be romantic. I'm glad it hit the mark.
Gypsy hugs
