Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Moonbeams Caress"Romantic Tanka Poems
12 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I've got two words for you, "cold shower", believe me, it works, plus, it saves on your electric bill; it's a win/win!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I've got two words for you, "cold shower", believe me, it works, plus, it saves on your electric bill; it's a win/win!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RGstar
Virtual Six
"...reverbarates...over my mounds and valleys''
How beautiful, how feminine, how sensual.
Just beautiful writing.
The image suits well the imagery, and the projection.
I am touched with this little piece. Beautiful Gypsy. All aspects of the Tanka to its utmost, remembering, a Tanka, can be just a Tanka, if not the words formulated ...and you have done this extremely well. I could have read more.
Well done.
I recommend your classes Gypsy, because when writing is as well preserved, and as well projected, so naturally, (and I have seen other instances) the teacher must have what it takes.
Bravo. This is a virtual six, in all aspects of sixes.
Well done.
If this was a competition, for the said category, I would have no doubt the winner.
Well done.
My best.
RG
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Virtual Six
"...reverbarates...over my mounds and valleys''
How beautiful, how feminine, how sensual.
Just beautiful writing.
The image suits well the imagery, and the projection.
I am touched with this little piece. Beautiful Gypsy. All aspects of the Tanka to its utmost, remembering, a Tanka, can be just a Tanka, if not the words formulated ...and you have done this extremely well. I could have read more.
Well done.
I recommend your classes Gypsy, because when writing is as well preserved, and as well projected, so naturally, (and I have seen other instances) the teacher must have what it takes.
Bravo. This is a virtual six, in all aspects of sixes.
Well done.
If this was a competition, for the said category, I would have no doubt the winner.
Well done.
My best.
RG
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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RG,
Thank you very much for your exceptional review and virtual six stars! I appreciate your time and feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from karenina
Stunning duet of Tanka, seeped in passion and longing and presented as only you can.
Your skill is well honed and I look to you for all manner of Japanese poetic forms. Beautifully rendered!
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Stunning duet of Tanka, seeped in passion and longing and presented as only you can.
Your skill is well honed and I look to you for all manner of Japanese poetic forms. Beautifully rendered!
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Karenina. . I appreciate your kind feedback. I wish you a peaceful and joyful day. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Write with the soul of a poer...
That is a blessing, to be sure!
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Thank you very much, Karenina :)
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This tanka is especially sensuous and romantic. I thought the roses were a lovely touch on your presentation. This lends it self to many romantic images and implies a romantic and excellent setting. Giddy
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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This tanka is especially sensuous and romantic. I thought the roses were a lovely touch on your presentation. This lends it self to many romantic images and implies a romantic and excellent setting. Giddy
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Giddy. I appreciate your kind feedback. I wish you a peaceful and joyful day. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sensual and subtle write of remembrance of that night of passion reverberating within and the yearn to repeat it, a passionate and embracing write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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A sensual and subtle write of remembrance of that night of passion reverberating within and the yearn to repeat it, a passionate and embracing write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Dolly. I appreciate your kind feedback. I wish you a peaceful and joyful day. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
You portray passion so deftly in this gorgeous poem.
Your delicate painting of passion is so breathtaking.
I guess what I like the most is that it is sensual, but in an innocent, delicate, and tasteful sense.
Good luck with all your writing, Gypsy,
Cindy
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Gypsy,
You portray passion so deftly in this gorgeous poem.
Your delicate painting of passion is so breathtaking.
I guess what I like the most is that it is sensual, but in an innocent, delicate, and tasteful sense.
Good luck with all your writing, Gypsy,
Cindy
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Cindy, thank you very much for your exceptional review and six stars! Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh yes this is the time for romance, and how beautifully you write it. Your adept use of metaphor makes this a pleasure to read and review.
I find the tanka a fascinating form, and you do it very well.
Much enjoyed. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Oh yes this is the time for romance, and how beautifully you write it. Your adept use of metaphor makes this a pleasure to read and review.
I find the tanka a fascinating form, and you do it very well.
Much enjoyed. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and helpful feedback, Gloria.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a beautiful and well-written poem. The artwork is lovely too and adds much to the meaning you want to convey to the reader. It has a nice flow which makes it easy to read and understand. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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This is a beautiful and well-written poem. The artwork is lovely too and adds much to the meaning you want to convey to the reader. It has a nice flow which makes it easy to read and understand. Nicely done.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from juliaSjames
"my mounts and valleys" - did you mean "mounds and valleys"?
"pinned to rekindle" - not sure what this means, Gypsy
My comments aside, I loved your rapturous pair of love tankas. You're a champion.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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"my mounts and valleys" - did you mean "mounds and valleys"?
"pinned to rekindle" - not sure what this means, Gypsy
My comments aside, I loved your rapturous pair of love tankas. You're a champion.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Yes, I meant mounds ( in my mind I was thinking mountain and valleys, is a classy way to say... breast and stomach...etc... ) But you're right, I corrected it. Even though I lived in the USA since I was 16, I still get some words incorrect. ...
"pinned to rekindle" - .. It's metaphor... Yearning pinned (attached or fastened) rekindled (restart their passion),
Thank you very much for your review and feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Your English is light years better than my Spanish LOL
Comment from royowen
You've written a very clever double tanka here Gypsy, the language you use is always so good, and the posts that you write are always a great example to all, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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You've written a very clever double tanka here Gypsy, the language you use is always so good, and the posts that you write are always a great example to all, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Roy.
Gypsy hugs
