Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your free verse reads well, J. I enjoyed reading it and thinking of all the info included about the state of our society. I could easily follow what you were thinking about. I agree with you about those who told it like it is, rather than politicians in their ivory towers. Your word have smooth flow and create great imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Your free verse reads well, J. I enjoyed reading it and thinking of all the info included about the state of our society. I could easily follow what you were thinking about. I agree with you about those who told it like it is, rather than politicians in their ivory towers. Your word have smooth flow and create great imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much Jan.
Comment from RGstar
This was strong JLR, all the different fields into one. Yes, sometimes difficult to hold on to the ride, but strong the projection, and, very real, thoughts.
I understand this poem very well, the times, the instances and the lyrics...songs and the way they mould to your thesis. Perhaps better on the prose side, yet, just a good deep piece of writing, especially important to the author.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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This was strong JLR, all the different fields into one. Yes, sometimes difficult to hold on to the ride, but strong the projection, and, very real, thoughts.
I understand this poem very well, the times, the instances and the lyrics...songs and the way they mould to your thesis. Perhaps better on the prose side, yet, just a good deep piece of writing, especially important to the author.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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RG, thanks!
Comment from in777wr#
This poem is a well crafted tribute to music legends. Your poem reads and flows well. Great poetic devices throughout this poem. Nice complimentary picture. Nice poem.
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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This poem is a well crafted tribute to music legends. Your poem reads and flows well. Great poetic devices throughout this poem. Nice complimentary picture. Nice poem.
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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I appreciate your taking the time to review and comment on this free verse.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You have simply and freely narrated all your feelings and emotions and appeals and encouragements or inspirations that two of your faourite legends of music and a shout of praise; though your verse is not impressive for the read; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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You have simply and freely narrated all your feelings and emotions and appeals and encouragements or inspirations that two of your faourite legends of music and a shout of praise; though your verse is not impressive for the read; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
