Mom Likes Me Best
A brother and sister conversation45 total reviews
Comment from Annmuma
Absolutely every set of siblings has had this conversation at one time or another. Indeed, I suspect most parents have made the statement you closed with it. Certainly, I did many times during my kids childhood's! Loved the story and congrats on the contest win! ann
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reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Absolutely every set of siblings has had this conversation at one time or another. Indeed, I suspect most parents have made the statement you closed with it. Certainly, I did many times during my kids childhood's! Loved the story and congrats on the contest win! ann
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Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Hugs
Comment from joann r romei
This was adorable, and I can just picture the children as I read the dialogue, it was very true to life, why do siblings love to do that to each other.?
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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This was adorable, and I can just picture the children as I read the dialogue, it was very true to life, why do siblings love to do that to each other.?
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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I come from a family of 12 so we often had conversations like this one. It wasn't hard to write because of that. Thank you for reading.
Comment from dragonpoet
This sounds like a conversations siblings would have. Ruth is an optimistic person it seems . She interprets things in the most possible light. But, she will understand soon that she has misinterpretted everything her mother has said.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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This sounds like a conversations siblings would have. Ruth is an optimistic person it seems . She interprets things in the most possible light. But, she will understand soon that she has misinterpretted everything her mother has said.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Hugs
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You're welcome on both accounts+
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Comment from Olivanne Marsh
My sister and I used to lament that Mom like the other best. You know how it goes, you get in trouble for something and your sister doesn't, it's because Mom likes her best. Ha, ha. This was such a nice story, I never knew a brother and sister to talk so nicely to each other, but this made it seem real. Added plus, it was humorous, made me smile, and it had some good lessons embedded in the dialogue. Enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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My sister and I used to lament that Mom like the other best. You know how it goes, you get in trouble for something and your sister doesn't, it's because Mom likes her best. Ha, ha. This was such a nice story, I never knew a brother and sister to talk so nicely to each other, but this made it seem real. Added plus, it was humorous, made me smile, and it had some good lessons embedded in the dialogue. Enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Hugs
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahahaha! I loved this -- it's simply too darn clever and cute, and very easy to 'imagine' these characters and this scene, even without the charming picture that accompanies it.
Congratulations on your win -- much deserved, IMO.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Hahahaha! I loved this -- it's simply too darn clever and cute, and very easy to 'imagine' these characters and this scene, even without the charming picture that accompanies it.
Congratulations on your win -- much deserved, IMO.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you. The picture actually is me and my brother, Roger. Thank you for the six stars. I appreciate them. Hugs
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Oh, how wonderful! You are most welcome.
Comment from ~Dovey
Congrats on the contest results.
I think I've heard this conversation before. A.common and relatable sibling rivalry. It made me smile.
Good job!
Kim
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Congrats on the contest results.
I think I've heard this conversation before. A.common and relatable sibling rivalry. It made me smile.
Good job!
Kim
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you. I was surprised it won anything in the contest. I just typed it fast at the last minute. Hugs.
Comment from Versch
You've done a great job with this Dialogue Only Writing Contest. It is clear who the speakers are even without the narratives. The conversation between the brother and sister sounds realistic. Congratulations for placing third in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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You've done a great job with this Dialogue Only Writing Contest. It is clear who the speakers are even without the narratives. The conversation between the brother and sister sounds realistic. Congratulations for placing third in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading and the six-stars. It is realistic because I grew up in a family of 12 and often heard conversations like this one. Hugs
Comment from Shirley McLain
This is cute. I enjoyed the read a lot. It reminded me of my own growing up years with my mother. I heard those exact remarks. You did a great job. Have a wonderful night. Shirley
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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This is cute. I enjoyed the read a lot. It reminded me of my own growing up years with my mother. I heard those exact remarks. You did a great job. Have a wonderful night. Shirley
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you. With seven brothers and four sisters I often heard conversations like this in our house. I may have contributed a few times. LOl. Hugs.
Comment from Aubree Lorraine
Haha! What a cute story! And, you're right, it sounds like a typical sibling conversation. Even similar to some I've heard from my own children. Why is it kids always believe their parents have a favorite? LOL
Anyway, great job. Good luck in the contest, and best wishes!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Haha! What a cute story! And, you're right, it sounds like a typical sibling conversation. Even similar to some I've heard from my own children. Why is it kids always believe their parents have a favorite? LOL
Anyway, great job. Good luck in the contest, and best wishes!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you. I don't know. We were always fighting over who mom liked best. I think she just loved us all. Hugs.
Comment from nomi338
Ruth has so much to learn. She is making the classic childish mistake of taking what an adult says literally. She is going to truly learn something when she is able to put into perspective the things her parents say. I suspect that her brother Roger already knows. He is trying to clue her in but, she is oblivious. I love this humorous story very much.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Ruth has so much to learn. She is making the classic childish mistake of taking what an adult says literally. She is going to truly learn something when she is able to put into perspective the things her parents say. I suspect that her brother Roger already knows. He is trying to clue her in but, she is oblivious. I love this humorous story very much.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you. With seven brothers and four sisters we did have conversations like this quite often. Hugs
