A Needle in a Haystack
A 200-word story15 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A very well written story. Such an event is possible, and you have captured the meeting perfectly. Your story is poignant and moving, as well as being written with skill. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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A very well written story. Such an event is possible, and you have captured the meeting perfectly. Your story is poignant and moving, as well as being written with skill. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Wendy, for your kind praise. I am very pleased you found my story poignant and moving.
Comment from moongirlwriter
This story touched my heart. This is a reminder that God has a plan for us and we only get learn this, when it happens. I'm sure the plan is to be here for each other. I love this story and how it brought the two of you together. Well written. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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This story touched my heart. This is a reminder that God has a plan for us and we only get learn this, when it happens. I'm sure the plan is to be here for each other. I love this story and how it brought the two of you together. Well written. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, moongirlwriter, for your lovely praise of my story and those six bright stars.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You created a tearful moment as these two characters have a special bond and your few words touched our hearts here, much enjoyed, albeit very sad, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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You created a tearful moment as these two characters have a special bond and your few words touched our hearts here, much enjoyed, albeit very sad, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Dolly, for your kind praise. I am very pleased my story touched your heart
Comment from oliver818
This is a very touching story and very believable. I can definitely picture the scene and how beautiful and sad it would be. Well done and thanks for sharing this
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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This is a very touching story and very believable. I can definitely picture the scene and how beautiful and sad it would be. Well done and thanks for sharing this
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, oliver818. I am very pleased you found my story touching and believable.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent story for the 200 hundred word contest
that has a beginning, middle and end, good setting,
and two excellent main characters.
Well done for such a short write.
The topic is one many can relate to either directly
or through family and friends.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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This is an excellent story for the 200 hundred word contest
that has a beginning, middle and end, good setting,
and two excellent main characters.
Well done for such a short write.
The topic is one many can relate to either directly
or through family and friends.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, Robert, for your splendid review of my story.
