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Waking from a dream

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Comment from Jasmine Girl
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Haha. This reads like a prose poem but it's Ok. It just has to be less or equal 75 words. I'm sure it is. I know I need to write it down as soon as I have a story idea. It's easily forgotten. You sent yourself an email?

Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
    Thank you, Yes, I did.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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LOL I do understand. My muse wakes me in the middle of the night with story ideas or a scene to a novel I'm writing. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
    Thank you!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Were the geese truly the key or writing a story in seventy-five words the better part of valor trying to meet the requirements of the challenge made by a felonious fellow or gal.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
    Dang, geese, still trying to figure out where the fiction is?
Comment from Malcolm Rothery
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Dead right! I have woken up many times with a great story idea - a dream residue perhaps - and then forgotten it before I could write it down.
I now take a pen and notepad to bed,
Good luck.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much.
Comment from tfawcus
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I wonder how many of those brilliant ideas we have in our dreams fade in the light of day never to be recaptured. One can only hope that, like geese, they have migrated and will one day return.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
    Thank you!
Comment from royowen
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It's so true, I'm wondering how many good poems have I consigned to the ether, simply because I hadn't jotted down the first words of the poem and theme, sheesh, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Thank you,sir.
reply by royowen on 08-Apr-2022
    Most welcome
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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The picture is nice. It matches the story. I am afraid, I miss something in this story about the geese. Can't draw any conclusive understanding.

Perhaps you can share with me what are the geese for...

Thanks for sharing.



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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022

Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I have often had this happen , and did recently but of course by next morning it was gone again. Unlike you I didn't send myself an email. I think that's amazing. Now I'm wondering what that gaggle of geese were getting up to. Good luck in the contest. Cheers

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    LOL, thanks l am wondering too!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Haha, yes, we've all been there. Then awakened and completely forgotten what could've been the winner. Lucky you--your email should've made you think about your dream. Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Jan, thank you!
Comment from Cristine22
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Haha! So relatable! I can't say how many times I've dreamt of the perfect story but couldn't remember it the next day. I like how you turned a simple thing into a fun little story and how the last line makes me think of what's to come. Great job!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
    Thank you so much, if I could only remember!