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Tragic

A very short story

3 total reviews 
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Oh, I contempt Mrs. Roy for the ploy of ridding herself of the adopted child. I cannot imagine being the parent of two adopted daughters that give us much joy.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022


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Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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This is a sad story. There have been true cases. The child needs to be put up for adoption to someone who wants children. And the new child will be lucky to grow up without being killed by the woman. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


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    You are welcome.
Comment from oliver818
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Wow that's harsh. She could have just given her back to the children's home for someone else to adopt. This is a very good story for this competition, beat of luck.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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