Forever After
A dangerous question52 total reviews
Comment from sandra roth
that was simple and sweet. it said a lot in a few words. I enjoyed reading it and feeling it. good idea, well thought out in a few words. and it truly said what Earl and Mabel felt for each other.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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that was simple and sweet. it said a lot in a few words. I enjoyed reading it and feeling it. good idea, well thought out in a few words. and it truly said what Earl and Mabel felt for each other.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the short story. Hugs.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Seems she has made herself, and her desires, well known.
What a choice he has, remarry and find happiness or be haunted forever.
Hand-counted fifty words so meets that requirement of the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Seems she has made herself, and her desires, well known.
What a choice he has, remarry and find happiness or be haunted forever.
Hand-counted fifty words so meets that requirement of the contest.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Hugs.
Comment from paige_a
Haha! What a fun and funny little bit of writing. I've considered throwing my hat in for a 50 word limit story but wasn't sure what I could write that would make a story. And here you are, presenting a master class in just that. Loved this.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Haha! What a fun and funny little bit of writing. I've considered throwing my hat in for a 50 word limit story but wasn't sure what I could write that would make a story. And here you are, presenting a master class in just that. Loved this.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and the six-stars. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Hugs.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Hahaha! There's a lot going on in this story. You used the caption in the picture wisely by letting the reader know the couple is in their golden years. The couple is old enough to talk about death. Then the suspense begins to build. Will Earl consider remarrying? The final punch line is hilarious. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Hahaha! There's a lot going on in this story. You used the caption in the picture wisely by letting the reader know the couple is in their golden years. The couple is old enough to talk about death. Then the suspense begins to build. Will Earl consider remarrying? The final punch line is hilarious. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. It was a fun story to write. My husband and I used to joke about things like this. So far, he hasn't come back to haunt me. Lol. Hugs.
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
Fun, humorous, and each word counts. I can't think of 50 words that could make a better story. Thanks for sharing and good luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Fun, humorous, and each word counts. I can't think of 50 words that could make a better story. Thanks for sharing and good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading and the six stars. It was a fun story to write. So far, my husband hasn't come back to haunt me. Than again, I have never remarried so who knows? Lol. Hugs.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I guess we know what Mabel really wants:-) I like the story, and I like that it's told in dialogue only. I am a little confused by the illustration - did the picture just happen to include the words about the retired couples, or did you add the words to give a background to your characters?
Anyway, well done.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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I guess we know what Mabel really wants:-) I like the story, and I like that it's told in dialogue only. I am a little confused by the illustration - did the picture just happen to include the words about the retired couples, or did you add the words to give a background to your characters?
Anyway, well done.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you. I added that picture because I liked the message with it. The words were already on the photo. Hugs
Comment from Jane Jane King
Very cute story with a great punchline at the end. The prospect of a an angry haunting ghost would discourage any notions of remarriage. LOL. Enjoyed much. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Very cute story with a great punchline at the end. The prospect of a an angry haunting ghost would discourage any notions of remarriage. LOL. Enjoyed much. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the silly story.
Comment from Bridge
An interesting story. I loved the humorous tone of the story. I love stories that make me smile/ laugh. Very well written given the constraints of the word count.
With regards
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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An interesting story. I loved the humorous tone of the story. I love stories that make me smile/ laugh. Very well written given the constraints of the word count.
With regards
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you. I'm glad I could give you a laugh. Hugs.
Comment from zanya
Yes - now that has to be a very interesting conversation and maybe a slightly embarrassing one too -! well told here in this 50 word prompt story - thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Yes - now that has to be a very interesting conversation and maybe a slightly embarrassing one too -! well told here in this 50 word prompt story - thanks for sharing
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Hugs
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifty-word story, Forever After, has the required word count and should give Earl enough of a hint as to how to answer an obviously loaded question.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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This fifty-word story, Forever After, has the required word count and should give Earl enough of a hint as to how to answer an obviously loaded question.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you for readingand commenting. Hugs. Love your profile picture.
