Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your fifty word story.
It's warm and well written and I love a happily ever after!
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022

Thank you, it was a surprise, being that there were so many great entries. Have a wonderful evening. :)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This fifty-word story, Close Enough, has the required word count and reminds the readers that a blond bird in the hand is worth two tall dark no shows.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022

You are indeed a wise man! Thank you for reading my poem. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I think that having your fortune read and then seeing someone that might become true gives us a boost and hope for a better future, I wish this girl lots of luck! Ha ha ha, fun write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022

Thank you, I really am always glad to hear from you. :)

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

The woman in your story will not have to look too far to find her dream man. Dream experts denote those men who appear in the fantasy of women have an erotic significance in most cases.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022

Thank you for this great review...I hope you have a wonderful evening. :)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 50 Word Story writing prompt contest. You managed to tell a whole story in 50 words! That's amazing. I just wrote a 100 word story and I thought it was hard. Well done. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022

Thank you for this great review. I usually only write poems, but I'm trying my hand at stories. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)

Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

This is very well written, and the gleam of the eye of the girl in the picture perfectly portrays the gleam that is shown in the writing of the story. I hope this one does well in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022

Thank you so much for such a great review, I'm so glad you liked it. :)

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

The picture is cute. You pick a good topic for this contest. You described the story well.

Let's pray that couple will end well.

Good luck to your contest.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022

Thanks so much for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)

Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

This is such a cute story! Hard to tell a story in 50 words but you did it well. Leaving us waiting more! Well done and liked the picture you chose too!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022

Thank you for this thoughtful review, it means a lot to me. :)

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I like this and enjoyed the read. It also shows how we don't need to evaluate people by their looks or attributes. But Mary was excited and ready for meeting her man, and finding love. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022

Thank you for this great review, it's so appreciated. :)

Comment from Leann DS

Excellent

This made me smile! It was a great story, especially for only having 50 words. All kinds of things were running through my head with the beginning, and then...Bam! Totally loved the ending!

Thank you for sharing this. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings to you.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022

Thank you for this great review...so glad you liked it. :)