Comment from royowen

Excellent

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust, except some of poor granddads dust and ashes have been consigned to the ether wherever the dust and ash of dearly departed folk. Beautifully written, articulate with great rhyming, well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022

Thanks for reviewing. This actually happened to my father's container of ashes but I've changed it a bit for the contest. After cremation, a few days later I was taking Dad home in a jar which was placed on the passenger seat beside me with the seat belt around it. The car in front stopped suddenly and I stomped on the brakes, sending Dad's jar flying. His ashes spilled into the foot well of my car and I had to vacuum him up later.

reply by royowen on 08-Apr-2022

Poor dad

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022

He was all right - i put him in another container and took him to a national park and scattered his ashes respectfully.

reply by royowen on 08-Apr-2022

That?s good