With Friends Like That...
Who needs enemies?7 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This is really good and the ending a surprise. I know so little of black magic and such I believe I have said enough. Good luck. ............................................
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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This is really good and the ending a surprise. I know so little of black magic and such I believe I have said enough. Good luck. ............................................
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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I don't either but I watch lots if horror movies..lol. Thanks for reading. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a very sinister tale you have woven! Great job using all the required words. I believe this will do very well in the contest! Great storytelling in a poem. Very impressive
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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This is a very sinister tale you have woven! Great job using all the required words. I believe this will do very well in the contest! Great storytelling in a poem. Very impressive
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate all of those wonderful stars. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We sometimes get mixed up with the wrong types in life and I have come to the same conclusion, being on my own is much preferable to the trouble you can invite into your life, a poignant story here with good advice in the end, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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We sometimes get mixed up with the wrong types in life and I have come to the same conclusion, being on my own is much preferable to the trouble you can invite into your life, a poignant story here with good advice in the end, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from jessizero
This was quite a tale. I definitely didn't see those twists coming. Thank you so much for choosing to share this story/poem here. Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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This was quite a tale. I definitely didn't see those twists coming. Thank you so much for choosing to share this story/poem here. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you for always reading my poem, it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from roof35
You certainly met the challenge in this poem--all the words were there. You made evil stand out vividly and yet I could chuckle a bit, too. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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You certainly met the challenge in this poem--all the words were there. You made evil stand out vividly and yet I could chuckle a bit, too. Nicely done.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Sometimes it would be best to be alone. Especially in his situation. I like the picture of the two-faced person. People can get involved with the wrong people, and sometimes they are sorry. Thank you for the great post.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Sometimes it would be best to be alone. Especially in his situation. I like the picture of the two-faced person. People can get involved with the wrong people, and sometimes they are sorry. Thank you for the great post.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thanks, I really appreciate this terrific review. :)
Comment from E. Denison
Great job here, mystery writer. You created a great narrative, weaving throughout the required words. The story is strong, and the rhyme is a useful metric, working together to escort the reader through the story. The paired image is also a nice touch! I think this will do well in the contest. Thank you for sharing and best of luck!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Great job here, mystery writer. You created a great narrative, weaving throughout the required words. The story is strong, and the rhyme is a useful metric, working together to escort the reader through the story. The paired image is also a nice touch! I think this will do well in the contest. Thank you for sharing and best of luck!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
