A Young Mother's Thoughts
.She hates doing the laundry.2 total reviews
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your rhymed poem. It's relatable...I hate the never-ending laundry cycle too!
Your poem flows well with a sound rhyme scheme and you incorporated all the required words. (All in the first stanza!)
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
ps: I just noticed that you have a 't' missing on the end of 'that' (stanza 4, line 1)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your rhymed poem. It's relatable...I hate the never-ending laundry cycle too!
Your poem flows well with a sound rhyme scheme and you incorporated all the required words. (All in the first stanza!)
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
ps: I just noticed that you have a 't' missing on the end of 'that' (stanza 4, line 1)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thanks, I fixed it
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Keeping the home clean with children about is a trial and I remember that the house was never tidy when I had little ones. You managed to include all these words in your poem and I wish you luck with the contest, fine rhymes and sentiments here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Keeping the home clean with children about is a trial and I remember that the house was never tidy when I had little ones. You managed to include all these words in your poem and I wish you luck with the contest, fine rhymes and sentiments here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thanks!
