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Heart Crafted Poems - 2022

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Musings of an old man - 2022

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Comment from Janet Foor
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I enjoyed reading your Joseph Star poem- Christ is coming again!

An interesting form I have never tried but you have accomplished it beautifully and with an excellent message.

Very well done.
blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Janet, thank you very much for the kind review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this beautifully written writing prompt entry with us. I enjoyed reading and yes, Jesus is the Great I Am, and He rose from the dead so we could be saved. God loved us that much. What a wonderful message!!!!!

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Barbara, thank you for your kind and supportive comments. Happy Easter
Comment from jessizero
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I love your poem. You followed the prompt and guidelines well. I agree that He will return, as it has been Written. Thank you so much for sharing this here.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Jessi - Thank you very much! Happy Easter!
Comment from nomi338
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We would all do well to pray constantly, for the return of Jesus and his angelic army is certain. It will be a time for not only judgement. It will also be a time when Jesus father Jehovah God's name will be vindicated, his rule firmly established and the imprisoning of Satan the Devil and his demons for a thousand years. Exciting, isn't it?

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Yes, very and I am certain I will see you on the uprise at sunrise, my friend :)
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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Very nice job with this prompt; I saw it yesterday and didn't have enough time to finish editing, as I had 5 stanzas:-) You stay on point here, meet the requirements of syllable placement, and it is spoken with passion.
Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    I appreciate your comments and good success to you on yours.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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I never heard of Joseph's star poem but I am really enjoying it. I saw a few and they look great! Yours is a fine spiritual poem, I like its shape. You have a great message and presentation.

The artwork you've chosen fits perfectly.

I wish you all the luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Thank you and yes there are many excellent entries.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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'A Known Truth ' , is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. To me this is definitely a six. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Thank you so very much for this unexpected sixer, my consummate reviewer and friend. Be very well this week and at all times. JLR
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 11-Apr-2022
    JLR, thank you for your very kind review. I'll do my best to follow your instructions.
    Bless you, the Duchess
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    That is just great, my never met friend!
    🤗🤗🎶🎶🙏 JLR
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 11-Apr-2022
    Take care, bless you and have a great week 😊😊👀🤷‍♀️ :)))) the Duchess
Comment from l.raven
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He will return...and when He does...
all will fall to their knees and pray...
they will see His words are true...

I love your poem...and love your stunning
picture...very well written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Linda, yes it is so, thank you! 🙏🙏
reply by l.raven on 12-Apr-2022
    your soooooo very welcome...🙏🌼🙏
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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Beautiful poem, with so many powerful words and meaning. The photo radiates the tone of your message, where I halfway expected to see an Angel to appear in the sunshine. Thank you for getting the message out there, as your right; Christ is coming again,

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Debi thank you!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Hallelujah. But why is this week the high point for many Christians and then the spirit felt is doused with mundane day to day living and worse, the media and internet? One thing to add, could Him instead of this work?

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Tom I think the answer is yes ... mass mind consciousness cloaks the light of God's constant presence - even though we know that he is Ever Present.