Comment from JLR

Excellent

Poet, you executed this double Joesph Star with perfect adherence to the contest rules. Your complete stanzas did make a perfect and clear sense, and I wish you well in the booth.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022

Thank you!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it. The picture is awesome, and a great
choice to pair with your words. Your syllable count is correct
per line, too.
May I suggest [I know your work, your choice.]
use a black background with a white font
make font size a bit larger
title-- Stars Shine

Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

Love the color scheme.
Title--Stars Shine

next to last line use them instead of it

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022

Thank you and thanks for your help. It looks better. Please check. Does it look good now?

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This Joseph's Star poem, Star Shines, has the proper formatting and suggests that there is power in those stars to alter what we feel needs changing. Let's wish then.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022

Thank you!