River of Life
We are just the same - looking for free lunch.12 total reviews
Comment from paige_a
Hey there! Your poem was a joy to read. Such a simple topic, yet told in a way that makes it feel like so much more. I loved the comparison between fisher and fish both looking for a free lunch that only one can gain - in this case, the fish won. Very good.
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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Hey there! Your poem was a joy to read. Such a simple topic, yet told in a way that makes it feel like so much more. I loved the comparison between fisher and fish both looking for a free lunch that only one can gain - in this case, the fish won. Very good.
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Hi - nice to know we are on the same 'paige' with your response to my poem. So pleased you like it. Feedback is always so useful to see if our thoughts have translated to others. You got it!! Thank you.
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Heheh, the name pun is much appreciated 😋😋
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Heheh, the name pun is much appreciated 😋😋
Comment from jessizero
I like that you and the fish each sought a free lunch, but neither of you ended up with it. (Or maybe he took your bait and escaped?) Thanks for sharing this amusing tale.
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I like that you and the fish each sought a free lunch, but neither of you ended up with it. (Or maybe he took your bait and escaped?) Thanks for sharing this amusing tale.
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
