One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Rena Smith
I like these words because they truly wake up the imagination. I can see the frosted dew glistening by the light of the moon as the writer eludes too. I love these words because they make you feel a sense of calm while shaking up the imagination. Great job writer and your words just always seem to come alive in your writing. I can't wait to read more of this. You truly have a gift, thanks.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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I like these words because they truly wake up the imagination. I can see the frosted dew glistening by the light of the moon as the writer eludes too. I love these words because they make you feel a sense of calm while shaking up the imagination. Great job writer and your words just always seem to come alive in your writing. I can't wait to read more of this. You truly have a gift, thanks.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and exceptional six stars review.
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Comment from dragonpoet
MariVal,
What a beautiful piece of artwork. It seems this is an ekphrastic poem. One of the good things about frost, ice and snow is how it adds beauty to the grass and trees.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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MariVal,
What a beautiful piece of artwork. It seems this is an ekphrastic poem. One of the good things about frost, ice and snow is how it adds beauty to the grass and trees.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 31-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Thank you! I'm happy to win second place (*<>*)
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
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You are most kindly welcome on both accounts, MariVal.
Joan
Comment from Mark Schardine
Human beings take pleasure in killing, and when we can imagine that the slain animals serve as food, then we overlook the harshness and cruelty of our way of thinking.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Human beings take pleasure in killing, and when we can imagine that the slain animals serve as food, then we overlook the harshness and cruelty of our way of thinking.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, yes the circle of life does have sad moments for it to be completed, your haiku gives the image of the hunter as he guts his meal, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Excellent, yes the circle of life does have sad moments for it to be completed, your haiku gives the image of the hunter as he guts his meal, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Kym. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. You are very kind.
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Comment from Mary Vigasin
A hauntingly beautiful and sad Haiku. The picture compliments your words beautifully with the sun reflection being blood in the water.
You capture also the hunter's joy as he celebrates the kill.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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A hauntingly beautiful and sad Haiku. The picture compliments your words beautifully with the sun reflection being blood in the water.
You capture also the hunter's joy as he celebrates the kill.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Mary. You are very kind.
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Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the Haiku Poetry contest, Gypsy. I generally don't review any poems or stories that take a life but this one was so very well done. I liked the picture of the stream and the follow up one of the deer. It was impressive. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Good luck wishes regarding the Haiku Poetry contest, Gypsy. I generally don't review any poems or stories that take a life but this one was so very well done. I liked the picture of the stream and the follow up one of the deer. It was impressive. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. You are very kind. Blessed be.
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Comment from lyenochka
The "life essence" is a good definition of blood. And the blood of the deer in the water is another way to look at that sunset on the water picture. Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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The "life essence" is a good definition of blood. And the blood of the deer in the water is another way to look at that sunset on the water picture. Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Helen. You are very kind.
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Comment from Gloria ....
This is a fine haiku in the traditional form. The two concrete images and the thought/satori all important third line.
Apt artwork and and a professional presentation.
Wishing you great luck with the Committee. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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This is a fine haiku in the traditional form. The two concrete images and the thought/satori all important third line.
Apt artwork and and a professional presentation.
Wishing you great luck with the Committee. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Gloria. The contest will not take place any time soon but if I win it will be a nice surprise. I had a few like that. :)
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like this Haiku poem - excellent picture presentation - very crisp and clear - good word count and connection between lines- notes help to support your poem - telling about hunters moon - informative poems that education, or give a new slant - perspective - way of looking at the subject matter - kind of like a satori in it self - I like takeaways - gives added dimension to the work. Good Job. Good luck in the contest too!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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I like this Haiku poem - excellent picture presentation - very crisp and clear - good word count and connection between lines- notes help to support your poem - telling about hunters moon - informative poems that education, or give a new slant - perspective - way of looking at the subject matter - kind of like a satori in it self - I like takeaways - gives added dimension to the work. Good Job. Good luck in the contest too!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, AP :) it's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your time and review.
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Comment from juliaSjames
Your skillful words strike a balance between nature and human nature. The climactic thrill of the kill is illustrated in your graphic imagery. This is exceptional work, Gypsy. Good luck in the contest.
Stay safe and blessed,
Hugs, Julia
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Your skillful words strike a balance between nature and human nature. The climactic thrill of the kill is illustrated in your graphic imagery. This is exceptional work, Gypsy. Good luck in the contest.
Stay safe and blessed,
Hugs, Julia
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Julia :) it's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your time and exceptional six stars review! It means a lot to me. Blessings.
Gypsy hugs
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Well deserved
