One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
This is a haunting haiku, and a very effective one. Some people in my family hunt, but I do not like it and I do not think it should be called a sport. This poem is so eerie--it really calls attention to the plight of the deer.
Excellent work, Gypsy.
Best wishes and blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Gypsy,
This is a haunting haiku, and a very effective one. Some people in my family hunt, but I do not like it and I do not think it should be called a sport. This poem is so eerie--it really calls attention to the plight of the deer.
Excellent work, Gypsy.
Best wishes and blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Cindy :) . I appreciate your lovely review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
What a great piece of artwork, which gives that sense of abeyance of the one to the other. The deer gives its life to nourish another, hopefully that's the case, or it's killing for no reason, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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What a great piece of artwork, which gives that sense of abeyance of the one to the other. The deer gives its life to nourish another, hopefully that's the case, or it's killing for no reason, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words, Roy. Blessings.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Absolutely stunning art, as the colors follow into your beautiful poem! I actually felt the rush of the hunter as they track and find their prey. You have such a beautiful soul and it shows with every word you give to your amazing poetry!
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Absolutely stunning art, as the colors follow into your beautiful poem! I actually felt the rush of the hunter as they track and find their prey. You have such a beautiful soul and it shows with every word you give to your amazing poetry!
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words, Debi. Blessings.
Gypsy hugs
