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Nail? What nail?30 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
You certainly met with excellence the writing prompt requirement to treat a serious subject as humor. I love your hyperbole humor, and the last verse was my favorite.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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You certainly met with excellence the writing prompt requirement to treat a serious subject as humor. I love your hyperbole humor, and the last verse was my favorite.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Verna. Glad it brought a smile.
Yard
Comment from Bridge
I couldn't help laughing. I love the humour that runs through the poem. You've managed to address the prompt perfectly. Very well written. Thanks for sharing.
With regards
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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I couldn't help laughing. I love the humour that runs through the poem. You've managed to address the prompt perfectly. Very well written. Thanks for sharing.
With regards
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Bridge. Glad you got a chuckle out of it. (;-)
Yard
Comment from R.B.Bunn
This was a fun poem about a serious situation. The tone was whimsical and consistent throughout the piece. I don't know why but the nail in the head situation originally striked me as a metaphor for mental health.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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This was a fun poem about a serious situation. The tone was whimsical and consistent throughout the piece. I don't know why but the nail in the head situation originally striked me as a metaphor for mental health.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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Thank you, RB. You may not be too far off with the metaphor, the author doesn't need a nail in his head to be a little crazy at times.
All the best, Yard.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I love this poem and it's whimsical tone. The illustration is a perfect choice and set the mood immediately. The rhymes work well without feeling forced. You did a great job with the prompt, very creative.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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I love this poem and it's whimsical tone. The illustration is a perfect choice and set the mood immediately. The rhymes work well without feeling forced. You did a great job with the prompt, very creative.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2022
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Thank you, KL. Your review and insight is very welcome.
All the best, Yard
Comment from jessizero
Your poem was hilarious. I swear I've seen my dad do this. He once put his fingers in a table saw and cut up his fingertips. He superglued them back together and kept working. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Your poem was hilarious. I swear I've seen my dad do this. He once put his fingers in a table saw and cut up his fingertips. He superglued them back together and kept working. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Ha, sounds like your dad is the man! Thanks, Yard
Comment from Wendy G
Very well done in your clever serious-humorous poem. You have captured both very well in skilful rhyme. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Very well done in your clever serious-humorous poem. You have captured both very well in skilful rhyme. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Windy. Tied for 2nd!
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Congratulations. Very original and clever.
Wendy
Comment from Paul McFarland
Pretty good job on the prompt. Those nail guns can be quite dangerous. Good use of humor in the way you take care of the injury. Should do okay in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Pretty good job on the prompt. Those nail guns can be quite dangerous. Good use of humor in the way you take care of the injury. Should do okay in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Paul. Tied for 2nd!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This is a serious, hilarious poem for sure. The hammer must have gotten carried away with its hammering! It would be terrible to get a nail in a head and then had to pull it out by using a claw hammer. Ouch!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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This is a serious, hilarious poem for sure. The hammer must have gotten carried away with its hammering! It would be terrible to get a nail in a head and then had to pull it out by using a claw hammer. Ouch!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Rosemary. Tied for 2nd!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Oh, yes, having a nail in your head is indeed serious--BUT I'm laughing out loud. You have certainly met the challenge of this prompt. The funniest part is your determination to get that picture frame hung up!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Oh, yes, having a nail in your head is indeed serious--BUT I'm laughing out loud. You have certainly met the challenge of this prompt. The funniest part is your determination to get that picture frame hung up!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Janice. Yes, I wanted the picture frame up with a certificate of carpentry accomplishment. But, I reigned myself in.
Tied for 2nd!
All the best Yard.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Excellent put together that made me laugh. Nice rhyming and flow. All in all a strong contest entry. Have a good Easter. Please take care and maybe another poem or two.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Excellent put together that made me laugh. Nice rhyming and flow. All in all a strong contest entry. Have a good Easter. Please take care and maybe another poem or two.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Barry. I wanted the picture frame up with a certificate of carpentry accomplishment. But, I reigned myself in.
Tied for 2nd!
All the best Yard.
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Deserving result for sure. No picture frames over Easter?
Take Care.
