Cradled
3/5/3 poem11 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 3/5/3 contest.
Congratulations on your winning, it's well deserved. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I love the imagery and presentation.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Excellent entry for the 3/5/3 contest.
Congratulations on your winning, it's well deserved. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I love the imagery and presentation.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Thank you, this means a lot coming form a haijin. I respect your opinion.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a great 3-5-3. It has a warm feeling of summer and beauty. I would like to wish you much success with the contest. Thank you for sharing. I think Robin eggs are the most beautiful blue.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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This is a great 3-5-3. It has a warm feeling of summer and beauty. I would like to wish you much success with the contest. Thank you for sharing. I think Robin eggs are the most beautiful blue.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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I do love robin's eggs, and I write about them a great deal. Thank you for the lovely review. I did win the contest, but had to share "first" with two others. Which was okay
Comment from zanya
A worthy winner for the 3-5-3 poetry contest and such a seasonal topic as Nature begins its beautiful renewal and new life emerges in all its glory- such a lovely pic
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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A worthy winner for the 3-5-3 poetry contest and such a seasonal topic as Nature begins its beautiful renewal and new life emerges in all its glory- such a lovely pic
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the review
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The picture and your words combined like the fixings for an apple pie. Delectably tasty. Good luck in this contest. I don't know if you'll win but
I LIKE YOUR ENTRY.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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The picture and your words combined like the fixings for an apple pie. Delectably tasty. Good luck in this contest. I don't know if you'll win but
I LIKE YOUR ENTRY.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this fun review. I LIKE MY ENTRY, too.
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful words, perfectly suited to the image. I like the link between the baby occupants of the nest and being cradled by the tree, and also the personification of nature smiling with pleasure at her role in looking after the future young. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Beautiful words, perfectly suited to the image. I like the link between the baby occupants of the nest and being cradled by the tree, and also the personification of nature smiling with pleasure at her role in looking after the future young. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the beautiful review
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written 3-5-3 poem. Natures cradle I love that. Beautiful overall presentation. Nice photo to compliment your words. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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This is a beautifully written 3-5-3 poem. Natures cradle I love that. Beautiful overall presentation. Nice photo to compliment your words. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review and luck, as I am sure I will need it.
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Your welcome
Comment from L. Kalere
I can just see and feel the motion of the tree, like a cradle. The nest is snuggled so comfy in the arms of the old tree...maybe a grandma? Nice imagery. Well done.
Linda
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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I can just see and feel the motion of the tree, like a cradle. The nest is snuggled so comfy in the arms of the old tree...maybe a grandma? Nice imagery. Well done.
Linda
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Beautiful review, and they are rare lately. You really have "gotten " my intention.
Comment from Karen Alexandra
I really enjoyed this poem. The imagery works well and leads me into the poem which has a 3-5-3 structure telling a lovely story of nature's treasure. Well done and good luck. Thank you for submitting it for review. Karen
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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I really enjoyed this poem. The imagery works well and leads me into the poem which has a 3-5-3 structure telling a lovely story of nature's treasure. Well done and good luck. Thank you for submitting it for review. Karen
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for this encouraging review.
Comment from jessizero
I think you did a great job evoking the feeling of the cycle of life. The new life of the birds watched over by the old life of the tree is a great image. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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I think you did a great job evoking the feeling of the cycle of life. The new life of the birds watched over by the old life of the tree is a great image. Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Thank you for "getting" my little poem
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Robins nesting is a delightful scene painted in your few words here, those colourful eggs producing sweet natured Robins, I love your sweet words, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Robins nesting is a delightful scene painted in your few words here, those colourful eggs producing sweet natured Robins, I love your sweet words, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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Well, I love your sweet words. Thank you
