Springtime Show
Anticipating...8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This monorhyme poem, Springtime Show, has the proper formatting and gives the readers hope that spring is really here at last. Of course, I look out the window and there's a blizzard happening.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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This monorhyme poem, Springtime Show, has the proper formatting and gives the readers hope that spring is really here at last. Of course, I look out the window and there's a blizzard happening.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Here as well! We just got 5 inches of heavy wet snow. Minnesota, am I right? Thanks for reading my poem. :)
Comment from MissMerri
I found this poem utterly delightful. I liked the theme and thought the word choices were excellent, even though restricted by the main rule of monorhyme. The meter was also excellent and added to the pleasing quality of this poem. Best of luck in the contest. I think this will be a vote-getter for sure.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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I found this poem utterly delightful. I liked the theme and thought the word choices were excellent, even though restricted by the main rule of monorhyme. The meter was also excellent and added to the pleasing quality of this poem. Best of luck in the contest. I think this will be a vote-getter for sure.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this great review, it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Wendy G
A lovely poem about the many aspects of Spring which are meaningful, both from the past and in the present. Your rhyme flows smoothly throughout. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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A lovely poem about the many aspects of Spring which are meaningful, both from the past and in the present. Your rhyme flows smoothly throughout. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this nice review and for reading my poem. :)
Comment from juliaSjames
This is a fabulous monorhyme poem. Sure you repeat some end rhymes but nothing is forced and the poem makes perfect sense in its depiction of the multifarious joys of spring.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Stay safe and blessed, Julia
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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This is a fabulous monorhyme poem. Sure you repeat some end rhymes but nothing is forced and the poem makes perfect sense in its depiction of the multifarious joys of spring.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Stay safe and blessed, Julia
Comment Written 17-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
I enjoyed reading your poem, such a great entry for the contest. Very well written and fun to read. We are all looking forward for Spring's show of flowers, after a long winter.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem, such a great entry for the contest. Very well written and fun to read. We are all looking forward for Spring's show of flowers, after a long winter.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this terrific review. :)
Comment from LisaMay
Your ten-syllable lines paint a beautiful picture of Spring approaching, and fishing and gardening activities being undertaken. I can relate to your words about your Mom making you put on a dress - I was a tomboy too, plus we had lilac bushes.
Your poem is full of the life that Spring brings, plus its emotional impact of calming and uplifting.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Your ten-syllable lines paint a beautiful picture of Spring approaching, and fishing and gardening activities being undertaken. I can relate to your words about your Mom making you put on a dress - I was a tomboy too, plus we had lilac bushes.
Your poem is full of the life that Spring brings, plus its emotional impact of calming and uplifting.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from jessizero
Your poem flowed so well that I didn't even notice the rhyme scheme. Some poets trip over this. Kudos to you! Thanks for sharing this ode to Spring with us here. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Your poem flowed so well that I didn't even notice the rhyme scheme. Some poets trip over this. Kudos to you! Thanks for sharing this ode to Spring with us here. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from paige_a
As an excited gardener, this poem made me ache for true spring and gave me hope that the rain and wind will eventually stop. Well done and kudos on this one!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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As an excited gardener, this poem made me ache for true spring and gave me hope that the rain and wind will eventually stop. Well done and kudos on this one!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2022
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Thank you for such a nice review, I'm glad you liked it. :)
