Covid Free
I pray we never again have to deal with such a deadly virus!38 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
Gee, this is good, and I wish you well in the Monorhyme contest. I also loved your message. Your expression of gratitude to health care workers is also much appreciated.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Gee, this is good, and I wish you well in the Monorhyme contest. I also loved your message. Your expression of gratitude to health care workers is also much appreciated.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Bob, you are so gracious! Your kind review and comments are so appreciated! Thanks for the smile!
Comment from Lilly Flowers
I spent two years living in fear and, although I'm aware that it's still around, I've had my shots and I'm not paranoid anymore. I enjoyed reading your poem and I agree with you that we owe so much to our health care workers.
Have you been reading about China's lockdowns? I can't believe that they are doing this and I really feel for the people. Anyway, I did enjoy reading your poem and really liked your rhyming choices. Best wishes, Lilly
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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I spent two years living in fear and, although I'm aware that it's still around, I've had my shots and I'm not paranoid anymore. I enjoyed reading your poem and I agree with you that we owe so much to our health care workers.
Have you been reading about China's lockdowns? I can't believe that they are doing this and I really feel for the people. Anyway, I did enjoy reading your poem and really liked your rhyming choices. Best wishes, Lilly
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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No Lily, I hadn't heard about China's lockdown, but will have to check it out.
But I thank you for your lovely review Lily! I appreciate it more than you could possibly know!
Comment from Raul1
I like your monorhyme very much. It is clear and concise. Well written. Well done. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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I like your monorhyme very much. It is clear and concise. Well written. Well done. It is interesting and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you Raul! Your kind review is so appreciated!
Comment from Bill Schott
This monorhyme poem, Covid Free, has the proper formatting and notes the people affected and those who have succumb to the disease.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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This monorhyme poem, Covid Free, has the proper formatting and notes the people affected and those who have succumb to the disease.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thank you Bill, for your very kind review!
Comment from karenina
The mono-rhyme seems perfect for your theme. For we've been stuck and stuck and stuck again... For all who've died, for masses who have weathered the storm only to still feel less than themselves, for the isolated and the lonely... I join you in thanking the tireless staff of countless hospitals under the direst of circumstances! I pray this is over. I fear we've not seen the end of it!
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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The mono-rhyme seems perfect for your theme. For we've been stuck and stuck and stuck again... For all who've died, for masses who have weathered the storm only to still feel less than themselves, for the isolated and the lonely... I join you in thanking the tireless staff of countless hospitals under the direst of circumstances! I pray this is over. I fear we've not seen the end of it!
Karenina
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thanks so very much for your very kind review and lovely comments.
It may not be over, but let's pray it's going in the right direction! 🙏
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Amen to that! As a retired RN of thirty-five years, I've seen my share of suffering!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The Holy Three. I know thee well, and where in the hierarchy they do tell. And even your entry into this club fest may find success as you have written this very well.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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The Holy Three. I know thee well, and where in the hierarchy they do tell. And even your entry into this club fest may find success as you have written this very well.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Tom, Thanks so very much for your very kind review and lovely comments.
It may not be over, but let's pray it's going in the right direction! 🙏
I always love your little extras! They always make me smile!
Comment from Janetsue
It is difficult to keep monorhyme from sounding chanty, but you have succeeded and passed on an important message, as well. Too many of us have lost family members and friends to Covid. It has to be as horrifying a feeling as the Black Plague was to people centuries ago--and other contagious diseases, as well. I am sincerely adding my voice to your prayers for the welfare of this present generation. Stay safe and well, Mystery Writer.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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It is difficult to keep monorhyme from sounding chanty, but you have succeeded and passed on an important message, as well. Too many of us have lost family members and friends to Covid. It has to be as horrifying a feeling as the Black Plague was to people centuries ago--and other contagious diseases, as well. I am sincerely adding my voice to your prayers for the welfare of this present generation. Stay safe and well, Mystery Writer.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thanks so very much for your very kind review and lovely comments.
It may not be over, but let's pray it's going in the right direction! 🙏
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem it has a great flow and rhyme. Yes COVID has affected so many people. So many loved ones lost. So sad and devastating. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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This is a nicely written poem it has a great flow and rhyme. Yes COVID has affected so many people. So many loved ones lost. So sad and devastating. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thanks so very much for your very kind review and lovely comments.
It may not be over, but let's pray it's going in the right direction! 🙏
Comment from lyenochka
Amen! So true - the whole world was affected. I like how you ended with the prayer to the Holy Three. I'm glad that your immediate family was spared and show your appreciation for our health care workers.
Great mono-rhymed poem with a relevant message for today. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Amen! So true - the whole world was affected. I like how you ended with the prayer to the Holy Three. I'm glad that your immediate family was spared and show your appreciation for our health care workers.
Great mono-rhymed poem with a relevant message for today. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Thanks so very much for your very kind review and lovely comments.
It may not be over, but let's pray it's going in the right direction! 🙏
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Amen! 🙏
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Your thoughts are the thoughts of many in this world! Well written and you stuck to the point. I have two suggestions - the background color makes it a little hard to read - maybe change that. In the last line, if you take out the word "soon" I think it would flow a little better.
Take care.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Your thoughts are the thoughts of many in this world! Well written and you stuck to the point. I have two suggestions - the background color makes it a little hard to read - maybe change that. In the last line, if you take out the word "soon" I think it would flow a little better.
Take care.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Maybe you can help me with this Pam; you must have read this between all my 20 edits. If I use advanced edit, then I can't get my font color to work, and its not an option down by the color of the background. However if you switch back to basic editing, you get to choose the color of your font, but it completely screws up the words. example: The lines separate far apart & all of a sudden all those AAAs start adding in everywhere, like you see at the very end of my poem. I changed it so many times and tried so many different thing. Finally I settled for a color for the background that would work, but I'm not loving. Lol, I think the word soon really bites there too, but lol, I just added because someone pointed out that covid is not over, so I shouldn't act like it is. Hahahaha!
Btw; thank you for your lovely review. Lol, you would have really liked it at first, before all the edits. : )
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I am sure that I have not come even close to mastering the editing on this site. I avoid advanced editor because it always screws me up in another way. I use the editor, pick font and color backgrounds, also my picture (usually from my computer). I copy and paste my document, save, then literally click on what I've posted, read it line by line and edit all those weird symbols out. It's a lot of work, especially if your document is long, but for now it's the best I've been able to do. You may have to just keep experiment, as I do. Good luck.
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Thanks Pam, maybe I will leave the advanced editing alone. I also do the copy and paste w picture & poem, but my font changes the second it gets pasted on this site.
Thanks again for your help.
