Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from l.raven
I hate war...it has to stop...
so many children...so many people dying
all out of greed...and who can take control..
enough...
your poem has so few words...but they say so
much...very well expressed...and very well written...
your picture says it all...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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I hate war...it has to stop...
so many children...so many people dying
all out of greed...and who can take control..
enough...
your poem has so few words...but they say so
much...very well expressed...and very well written...
your picture says it all...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Linda, ask any veteran of any war in any land and they would agree passionately.
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my heart goes out to all veterans
they should be honored...not disrespected...
Comment from John Ciarmello
A heartfelt piece and unfortunately tragic. We can only pray it all ends soon. I'm not a big poetry writing guy therefore it didn't surprise me I've never heard of a Trinet. You write well.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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A heartfelt piece and unfortunately tragic. We can only pray it all ends soon. I'm not a big poetry writing guy therefore it didn't surprise me I've never heard of a Trinet. You write well.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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John, I appreciate your comments.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, a timely poem. The war in Ukraine has everyone heartbroken. If only there was a quick solution. Your poem reads
and flows well, and its message is clear. Of special note:
Please, can we war no more?
(If only)
Well-chosen photo. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
LateBloomer
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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Hello author, a timely poem. The war in Ukraine has everyone heartbroken. If only there was a quick solution. Your poem reads
and flows well, and its message is clear. Of special note:
Please, can we war no more?
(If only)
Well-chosen photo. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
LateBloomer
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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LateBloomer, thank you for reviewing and offering good wishes.
Comment from Sarah Tummey
Well done for the trinet. I hope you do well in the contest.
I like how your poem is an appeal for peace. I expect what's happening in Ukraine will prompt a lot of this type of writing.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Well done for the trinet. I hope you do well in the contest.
I like how your poem is an appeal for peace. I expect what's happening in Ukraine will prompt a lot of this type of writing.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Sarah, thank you. Let us hope this will be the case.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. Yes, we should all pray for an end to wars everywhere. I am in constant prayer. I enjoyed reading your entry.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. Yes, we should all pray for an end to wars everywhere. I am in constant prayer. I enjoyed reading your entry.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Thanks very much for your prayers!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I get confused with all the views how every poetic form must have a name. Trinet? Why? To me this would have been free verse, short and meaningful relating a message concerning war. That said, you met the criteria of a Trinet... and did it well.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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I get confused with all the views how every poetic form must have a name. Trinet? Why? To me this would have been free verse, short and meaningful relating a message concerning war. That said, you met the criteria of a Trinet... and did it well.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Tom, I agree -- My most natural and personal favorite is free verse poetry. While free verse has its rules - the flow, if done correctly can deliver tremendous power.
Comment from lyenochka
Good use of this brief Trinet poetic form to spell out a plea that we all agree with. It's heart-wrenching every night to hear of families being killed in this senseless war. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Good use of this brief Trinet poetic form to spell out a plea that we all agree with. It's heart-wrenching every night to hear of families being killed in this senseless war. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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lyenochka, I am most humbled by your supportive comments. Thank you!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Why ' , is an extremely well-written and heart-wrenching piece. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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' Why ' , is an extremely well-written and heart-wrenching piece. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Hello my Aussie friend, I am most humbled by your supportive comments. Thank you from he with those pesky aches, pains and strains that come from aging body parts!
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My dear never met friend. You're very welcome. Why is it that our body parts start to disintegrate when we get older?
Dear Anon, pesky aches and body parts are just TOO rough.
Take care and stay safe,
the Duchess
Comment from 1Dreamer
Love your words and the outstanding picture you chose to accompany them. It is dreadful and horrid what is happening now in this world and I, even before the war, felt that there are so many things happening to the poor children when even as adults we struggle to make sense of it all.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Love your words and the outstanding picture you chose to accompany them. It is dreadful and horrid what is happening now in this world and I, even before the war, felt that there are so many things happening to the poor children when even as adults we struggle to make sense of it all.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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I am most humbled by your supportive comments. Thank you!
Comment from LisaMay
Oh I do heartily agree! I, like you, am sickened by the tragedies inflicted on innocents. The loss of life in tragic scenes should not be a part of civilized society.
Your strongly worded poem shows emotion and empathy.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Oh I do heartily agree! I, like you, am sickened by the tragedies inflicted on innocents. The loss of life in tragic scenes should not be a part of civilized society.
Your strongly worded poem shows emotion and empathy.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Hello LisaMay, I am most humbled by your supportive comments. Thank you! I hope you are getting along well!
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Thanks... yes, I am getting along well. I was exposed to someone with Covid but I have not developed any symptoms.
