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Good advice for my first date.
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Debbie Pope
Oh, you have a winner here. Surely you know that. I have nothing at all to say that would improve the impact of your words. I love aphorisms and you took a good one and ran with it.
Nice job, LisaMay.
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
Thanks for reviewing. I think the contest organiser was looking for nonsense entries, but I remembered that song and hung my story off it.
reply by Debbie Pope on 22-Apr-2022
I like that approach. You made something out of the contest. That thought actually crossed my mind as I read your post.
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