Much Like a Song
Kouta poems and songs have much in common.2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-I like how you include the form in your poem.
-Effective imagery describes the form,
and good use of rhyme, as well.
-I like the transition to the the writer
who is "hopeful love will start."
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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-Nice image and presentation.
-I like how you include the form in your poem.
-Effective imagery describes the form,
and good use of rhyme, as well.
-I like the transition to the the writer
who is "hopeful love will start."
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thanks for the read and the encouraging feedback.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have never heard of a Kouta and it sounds aboriginal to me, I wish you luck with this form and the contest, I could at least hear a tuneful song here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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I have never heard of a Kouta and it sounds aboriginal to me, I wish you luck with this form and the contest, I could at least hear a tuneful song here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2022
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Thanks for the read, Dolly, and the feedback. Now it just needs a little tune to go with it.
