Butterfly
5-7-5 contest7 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
Hello,
I love this poem for its simplicity.
-Utter, and uncluttered delight to read, in haiku form.
-Butterflies bring good energy and have energized your poem.
Very well done. Have a nice day.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Hello,
I love this poem for its simplicity.
-Utter, and uncluttered delight to read, in haiku form.
-Butterflies bring good energy and have energized your poem.
Very well done. Have a nice day.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
So true and we appreciate these delightful scenes in the summer when the garden is alive with insects, a magical write here, much enjoyed, good luck with it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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So true and we appreciate these delightful scenes in the summer when the garden is alive with insects, a magical write here, much enjoyed, good luck with it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Tom Horonzy
No doubt the fluttering flutter fly is as amazing. Almost, as the hummingbird. Makes me wonder how good nectar must be to feast upon, what about you? Anyhow, how would we harvest it?
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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No doubt the fluttering flutter fly is as amazing. Almost, as the hummingbird. Makes me wonder how good nectar must be to feast upon, what about you? Anyhow, how would we harvest it?
Comment Written 24-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2022
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Thank you. Nectar would be golden to birds
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and good comparison of
simplicity to a butterfly.
-A good concluding line with the added alliteration.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and good comparison of
simplicity to a butterfly.
-A good concluding line with the added alliteration.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with the theme of nature.
Wonderful description and visual imagery,
as well as use of language and alliteration.
Nicely done.
Best wishes. Robert
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with the theme of nature.
Wonderful description and visual imagery,
as well as use of language and alliteration.
Nicely done.
Best wishes. Robert
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you
Comment from RodG
In Spring your poem could not be more appropriate. Indeed, I love the "simplicity" of a single butterfly "gracing the garden." Nice use of alliteration with the g's and f's. Rod
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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In Spring your poem could not be more appropriate. Indeed, I love the "simplicity" of a single butterfly "gracing the garden." Nice use of alliteration with the g's and f's. Rod
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
It sure is simplicity. I love butterflies. And when I see them, I think of my grandma. They are beautiful. They go about their business and never bother anyone. They only show their beauty. Thank you for sharing. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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It sure is simplicity. I love butterflies. And when I see them, I think of my grandma. They are beautiful. They go about their business and never bother anyone. They only show their beauty. Thank you for sharing. Have a great day.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
