Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Life's Lessons Learned"Musings of an old man - 2022
34 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The alliteration with s's becomes onomatopoetic. It creates the sounds of the water. The r's create a sense of strength. The b's & p's create a explosive tone. Look at your lips as you pronounce the b or p words. Well done
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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The alliteration with s's becomes onomatopoetic. It creates the sounds of the water. The r's create a sense of strength. The b's & p's create a explosive tone. Look at your lips as you pronounce the b or p words. Well done
Comment Written 04-May-2022
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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Liz I so appreciate your comments.
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***smile***
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely descriptive free verse interpretation, JLR of the passing of time and knowledge through time spent together. Really enjoyed this one. Cheers
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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A lovely descriptive free verse interpretation, JLR of the passing of time and knowledge through time spent together. Really enjoyed this one. Cheers
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Valda, thank you!
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nicely done, JLR. The Pa in your poem was my Grand-Pa years ago. I was lucky, as your youngster in the poem was, to have a guiding hand while growing up.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Nicely done, JLR. The Pa in your poem was my Grand-Pa years ago. I was lucky, as your youngster in the poem was, to have a guiding hand while growing up.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Paul I wish todays children all had more guiding hands.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Jim, memories like this are never forgotten
my sweet friend...I have so many of my
family and I as well...
they are so precious at this age...so innocent...
wanting to be like their parents...
I love your poem sweet guy...and this picture is
breathtaking...so very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Hi Jim, memories like this are never forgotten
my sweet friend...I have so many of my
family and I as well...
they are so precious at this age...so innocent...
wanting to be like their parents...
I love your poem sweet guy...and this picture is
breathtaking...so very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Linda, that is very kind on your part to give this poem a six star validation. Yes, those special times we have with our families are the jewels that can?t be ours purchased.
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Amen, and you so earned the stars sweet guy...your welcome to them...I love your poem...
as I get older...and family memories are passing...I wish now we would have lived closer...sigh...love xxoo
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Life's Lessons Learned, finds the teachable moment when the wisdom of the family's forefathers travels again from father to son. Nice.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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This free verse, Life's Lessons Learned, finds the teachable moment when the wisdom of the family's forefathers travels again from father to son. Nice.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Thanks Bill
Comment from Janet Foor
An excellent poem and you wrote a beautiful message into the club picture.
I loved the personification of nature.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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An excellent poem and you wrote a beautiful message into the club picture.
I loved the personification of nature.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Janet, 🙏. Thank you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. It read as a story/poem. I am sure that was your intent. I enjoyed your memory and it brought up some of mine dealing with fishing.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. It read as a story/poem. I am sure that was your intent. I enjoyed your memory and it brought up some of mine dealing with fishing.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Hi Barbara! I am very appreciative of your review and comment!
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is an excellent poem. I hope the writing club likes it as much as I do. First, it has a great message of information passing from father to child to grandchild. Second, the imagery of the evening is beautiful. Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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This is an excellent poem. I hope the writing club likes it as much as I do. First, it has a great message of information passing from father to child to grandchild. Second, the imagery of the evening is beautiful. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Terry, I am delighted that you liked this!
Comment from Wendy G
I like the way you presented the teaching through generations of many sayings presenting wisdom for living and life lessons. Central to this is the fishing pole being passed through the generations.
Well done. Very effective and impactful.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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I like the way you presented the teaching through generations of many sayings presenting wisdom for living and life lessons. Central to this is the fishing pole being passed through the generations.
Well done. Very effective and impactful.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Wendy!
Comment from DeboraDyess
You did a great job with the picture, JLR. I love the thought of Pa passing down the lessons he'd learned from his own father in that spot, using that pole. What a beautiful memory poem!
Blessings and thank you for sharing.
Deb
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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You did a great job with the picture, JLR. I love the thought of Pa passing down the lessons he'd learned from his own father in that spot, using that pole. What a beautiful memory poem!
Blessings and thank you for sharing.
Deb
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Deb, thank you!
