Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Life's Lessons Learned"Musings of an old man - 2022
34 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
there are some men who do not have houses, cars, boats or planes to leave their sons. However, those men who leave prime examples of how to be real men: brave , honorable, caring providers for their wives and children. Men who keep their word, praise and honor their creator. Men who love their fellow men, respect their country and those who fight to keep us all safe. These men leave their children a fortune that cannot be stolen, will not rust or ever lose its value.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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there are some men who do not have houses, cars, boats or planes to leave their sons. However, those men who leave prime examples of how to be real men: brave , honorable, caring providers for their wives and children. Men who keep their word, praise and honor their creator. Men who love their fellow men, respect their country and those who fight to keep us all safe. These men leave their children a fortune that cannot be stolen, will not rust or ever lose its value.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Amen! Amen! Thank you Nomi!
Comment from Raul1
I like how this poem describes nature how it acts. It's beautifully written. I like your poem. Excellent work! Good job! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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I like how this poem describes nature how it acts. It's beautifully written. I like your poem. Excellent work! Good job! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Thank you, sir!
Comment from Dawn Munro
What beautiful sentiment this poem expresses and evokes -- precious memories, and a mental image that couldn't be more serene. I loved it! Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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What beautiful sentiment this poem expresses and evokes -- precious memories, and a mental image that couldn't be more serene. I loved it! Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your delightful comments!
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You are very welcome. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a very beautiful observation of the photo. Very inspirational and quite fitting. Lessons that Pa's Pa passed downwhen he also clutched the same pole in his handsunder that full moon,
many moons ago.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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This is a very beautiful observation of the photo. Very inspirational and quite fitting. Lessons that Pa's Pa passed downwhen he also clutched the same pole in his handsunder that full moon,
many moons ago.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Joanne, thank you!
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Your welcome
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I enjoyed your free verse, giving vivid memories f times long gone. I especially liked the way you introduced all the wisdom your father had passed on to you at thet time of your life.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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I enjoyed your free verse, giving vivid memories f times long gone. I especially liked the way you introduced all the wisdom your father had passed on to you at thet time of your life.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Katherine!
Comment from Marienkiefer
I love how your poem is storied,
-Wonderful storyline within a poem.
-Endearing scenes.
-And good advice to a son, while sharing a special moment,
I enjoyed reading your ooem and listening in on their conversation.
Have a nice day.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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I love how your poem is storied,
-Wonderful storyline within a poem.
-Endearing scenes.
-And good advice to a son, while sharing a special moment,
I enjoyed reading your ooem and listening in on their conversation.
Have a nice day.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Marie, thanks so much!
Comment from TPAC
Yeah, I miss my Pa, who was my grandfather. We, also, went fishing your notes bringing back to me that memory. I left his butt that day pulling up a crawfish. Super read in my given opinion.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Yeah, I miss my Pa, who was my grandfather. We, also, went fishing your notes bringing back to me that memory. I left his butt that day pulling up a crawfish. Super read in my given opinion.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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TPAC, we share this in common my grandfather was my Pa also. I too miss him 40 years later still.
Comment from Goosey Gander
Brilliant. I do have one suggestion, however. On your line in the third paragraph, "Never tell tales out of school.." You may want to place another period. Otherwise, brilliant poem. Congratulations, JLR! You have passed the Goosey Gander test :)
-GG
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Brilliant. I do have one suggestion, however. On your line in the third paragraph, "Never tell tales out of school.." You may want to place another period. Otherwise, brilliant poem. Congratulations, JLR! You have passed the Goosey Gander test :)
-GG
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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I am pleased to have passed theGoosey Gander test ...
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed this free verse as it is well written and presented. You did a good job with the prompt, very creative.
I would consider the last stanza. The use of "Pa" multiple times feels awkward.
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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I enjoyed this free verse as it is well written and presented. You did a good job with the prompt, very creative.
I would consider the last stanza. The use of "Pa" multiple times feels awkward.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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K.L. I believe perhaps you are correct in your assessment. Thank you for your honest input. I strive always to present polished works.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Life's Lessons Learned ' , is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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' Life's Lessons Learned ' , is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Most grateful, my Aussie friend!
