Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Life's Lessons Learned"Musings of an old man - 2022
34 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem reads well, JLR. Even if no picture has
been included, readers could imagine the scene as they
read. Your lines read smooth with great imagery. I like
the lessons Pa taught the son. Thanks for participating.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Your poem reads well, JLR. Even if no picture has
been included, readers could imagine the scene as they
read. Your lines read smooth with great imagery. I like
the lessons Pa taught the son. Thanks for participating.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Hi Jan Humm. I used the picture your promoted. I am surprised you can?t see it.
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Ih, nio. That isn't what I meant. My words are praising the use of descriptive words such that readers could see a piture in their minds if no picture had been included. I can see the picture. 😊🐈⬛
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Make that--Oh no. I dislike the fact these replies can't be corrected.
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Hi Jan Humm. I used the picture your promoted. I am surprised you can?t see it.
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I replied yesterday. I can see your picture. I meant your words were so descriptive that a picture wasn't necessary even though there was the one from the club. Did that reply show?
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Jan, Sorry I did not see your note back, I understand now even more grateful for your review and comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore this free-write, you created a magical scene here of love and devotion and I felt the warmth and the connection here, magical words and well worth a six, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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I adore this free-write, you created a magical scene here of love and devotion and I felt the warmth and the connection here, magical words and well worth a six, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Dolly, I am most appreciative!
Comment from royowen
We can never devalue the lives of those that have gone before us, we know that the generations that go before, have sown value into us, and of course our values and value come through those lessons taught. Beautifully written Jim, this is a great post, honouring Pa and Pa's Pa. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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We can never devalue the lives of those that have gone before us, we know that the generations that go before, have sown value into us, and of course our values and value come through those lessons taught. Beautifully written Jim, this is a great post, honouring Pa and Pa's Pa. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Hi Roy, thank you
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Welcome Jim
Comment from lyenochka
That's a beautiful memory. I am always impressed to read about parents spending time with their children that way. Great way to spend time to pass on wisdom from generation to generation.
I like your presentation to really make those words pop out.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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That's a beautiful memory. I am always impressed to read about parents spending time with their children that way. Great way to spend time to pass on wisdom from generation to generation.
I like your presentation to really make those words pop out.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from dragonpoet
JLR,
This is a well done ekphrastic ode to your dad and grandfather. It shows the love that was between you and how nature makes it easier to take good advice. Good answer to the club picture prompt
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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JLR,
This is a well done ekphrastic ode to your dad and grandfather. It shows the love that was between you and how nature makes it easier to take good advice. Good answer to the club picture prompt
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Hi Joan, I trust all is well in your circle. Thank you for the kind comments.
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Yes it is,JLR. Thanks.
My pleasure.
Joan
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Aren't these memories wonderful? And I imagine you have shared the same words with someone else along the way.
Beautiful and poignant, you tell the story of love passed down through wise advice and time spent together as opposed to things bought.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Aren't these memories wonderful? And I imagine you have shared the same words with someone else along the way.
Beautiful and poignant, you tell the story of love passed down through wise advice and time spent together as opposed to things bought.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you much, Pam!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello JLR, your writing is heartfelt, and it left me with the feeling of ahh.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good imagery within.
I especially liked:
Pa's rugged hand rests gently on my back as he
watches intently at my fishing line, stirring in
the ebb and flow of the whisper
(Good descriptive writing. I can see it..)
Beautiful photo choice. I think we all would love to live in such a place.
"Free verse is free-flow from the heart ~ LateBloomer"
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Hello JLR, your writing is heartfelt, and it left me with the feeling of ahh.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good imagery within.
I especially liked:
Pa's rugged hand rests gently on my back as he
watches intently at my fishing line, stirring in
the ebb and flow of the whisper
(Good descriptive writing. I can see it..)
Beautiful photo choice. I think we all would love to live in such a place.
"Free verse is free-flow from the heart ~ LateBloomer"
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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LateBloomer, your kind review is very validating. Thank you~
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Smiles.
Comment from Lilly Flowers
This sure makes me nostalgic for the simpler times. Children are learning horrible behavior because of social networking.
This is a lovely poem to go with that terrific image. It is very nicely written. Best regards, Lilly
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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This sure makes me nostalgic for the simpler times. Children are learning horrible behavior because of social networking.
This is a lovely poem to go with that terrific image. It is very nicely written. Best regards, Lilly
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you Lilly flowers ...
Comment from JoannaN
I love the harmony between the picture and your poem. This poem brings a lot of good, pleasant memories, there is a hint of nostalgia behind these words. I can clearly imagine this scene in a real life.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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I love the harmony between the picture and your poem. This poem brings a lot of good, pleasant memories, there is a hint of nostalgia behind these words. I can clearly imagine this scene in a real life.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Joanna, thank you for your positive review on my club poem.
Comment from Julcia
You display a significant use of the English language. Your poem evidences
a work created by an accomplished poet. Write On ! I am new to Fan Story,
enjoy your work and would like to follow your efforts in both poetry and novels.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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You display a significant use of the English language. Your poem evidences
a work created by an accomplished poet. Write On ! I am new to Fan Story,
enjoy your work and would like to follow your efforts in both poetry and novels.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Julcia, thank you for your very validating comment and welcome to, why I hope for you, is a wonderful experience and place you will find encouragement and support in your writing endeavor.
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Thanks in advance.
Julcia
