Happy Mel May Day
Celebrating two special days68 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a three-stanza poem utilizing rhyme (end rhymes and also an internal rhyme with day/say) with a happy, welcoming tone. It sounds like your daughter-in-law is a great person who even can influence Spring itself. Fun read.
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This is a three-stanza poem utilizing rhyme (end rhymes and also an internal rhyme with day/say) with a happy, welcoming tone. It sounds like your daughter-in-law is a great person who even can influence Spring itself. Fun read.
Comment Written 05-May-2024
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debi,
when two beautiful faces appear on my screen... and without a word being read allows a sense of magic within what I see, is a very special relationship.
Now, I read about your love of Mel before... and it's apparent with, yes, not only the photo of the two of you, but the beautiful words and poem you have created for your sweet 'daughter'.
My sister's birthday is on the same day.... but there are no smiles as I see here, only sadness of what could have been. But, I'm not bringing this magic poem or occasion down... this kind of beauty deserves nothing but the respect and accreditation it so deserves.
Happy belated birthday dear sweet May Day Mel! Your son is a very fortunate man!
All the best of wishes for a pleasing result in this contest dear friend.
With our thoughts we create...
a family affair.
Warmest regards,
James.
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Hi Debi,
when two beautiful faces appear on my screen... and without a word being read allows a sense of magic within what I see, is a very special relationship.
Now, I read about your love of Mel before... and it's apparent with, yes, not only the photo of the two of you, but the beautiful words and poem you have created for your sweet 'daughter'.
My sister's birthday is on the same day.... but there are no smiles as I see here, only sadness of what could have been. But, I'm not bringing this magic poem or occasion down... this kind of beauty deserves nothing but the respect and accreditation it so deserves.
Happy belated birthday dear sweet May Day Mel! Your son is a very fortunate man!
All the best of wishes for a pleasing result in this contest dear friend.
With our thoughts we create...
a family affair.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 05-May-2024
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done May Day tribute to your daughter-in-law. Her sweet loving personality shines through your verse, an ode to her spirit. well done loved this tribute
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nicely done May Day tribute to your daughter-in-law. Her sweet loving personality shines through your verse, an ode to her spirit. well done loved this tribute
Comment Written 04-May-2024
Comment from Kaiku
I especially like May as it's the month of my birthday. Big sister I share a similar day in the month of May. When the month is done my sweet young niece has us all rolled into one! Happy Birthday to all in the wonderful month of May
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I especially like May as it's the month of my birthday. Big sister I share a similar day in the month of May. When the month is done my sweet young niece has us all rolled into one! Happy Birthday to all in the wonderful month of May
Comment Written 04-May-2024
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Debi a lovely poem for your daughte-in-law Mel who looks gorgeous
It is also my daughter-in- laws Dani's birthday on the 1st May and she is also a lovely girl snd turned 37 this year.
So we must be lucky to both gave great d-i-l's
Happy Birthday Mel
Cheers Chris x
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Hi Debi a lovely poem for your daughte-in-law Mel who looks gorgeous
It is also my daughter-in- laws Dani's birthday on the 1st May and she is also a lovely girl snd turned 37 this year.
So we must be lucky to both gave great d-i-l's
Happy Birthday Mel
Cheers Chris x
Comment Written 04-May-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
Happy Birthday, Mel and May! The first day of the month, time to plant my tomato plants and get ready for some good ole homemade salsa. I can hardly wait. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Happy Birthday, Mel and May! The first day of the month, time to plant my tomato plants and get ready for some good ole homemade salsa. I can hardly wait. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Hahahahaha! Ric, why do I get the impression you don't like poetry? You are so funny, but I am just happy to see you come my way, my friend, dear friend. I love your sense of humor, and I bet I'd really like your salsa. Thanks so much. Love, Debi
Comment from Sanku
Wow! that is great! May Day and Mel's birthday is on the same day .You are lucky to have daughter-in-law who is always sunshine when the skies are grey...My belated wishes for her...
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Wow! that is great! May Day and Mel's birthday is on the same day .You are lucky to have daughter-in-law who is always sunshine when the skies are grey...My belated wishes for her...
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Hi Santha, and thanks so much for this lovely review of Mel's poem. She is like my own, so it is not hard to say nice things about her.
Thanks again, my sweet friend. Love, Debi
Comment from jim vecchio
This is my 3rd attempt to post a review as my Internet keeps going out. I had such nice things to say but twice they disappeared. You are blessed with a wonderful family. Hope this one goes through.
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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This is my 3rd attempt to post a review as my Internet keeps going out. I had such nice things to say but twice they disappeared. You are blessed with a wonderful family. Hope this one goes through.
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Jim, I thank you for the kind words you said about Mel and her poem. So appreciated, my friend. Love, Debi
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Now I have a new wifi and my replies should be getting to you in more timely manner and not disappearing.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely poem for your daughter in law on her May day birthday. My son in law is a May day baby too. Your twelve line poems is full of love and cheer, bubbling all over. A nice bright read to start my morning, Debi.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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A lovely poem for your daughter in law on her May day birthday. My son in law is a May day baby too. Your twelve line poems is full of love and cheer, bubbling all over. A nice bright read to start my morning, Debi.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Hi Valda, happy birthday to your son in-law too. I thank you for the kind words you said about Mel and her poem. So appreciated, my friend. Love, Debi
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a clever way to personalize the birthday/May day theme. Cute twosome in the picture. I liked the way it was styled and the female day part. What woman couldn't use one of those? Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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This was a clever way to personalize the birthday/May day theme. Cute twosome in the picture. I liked the way it was styled and the female day part. What woman couldn't use one of those? Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Dearest Gretchen, you are so sweet. I thank you for the kind words you said about Mel and her poem. So appreciated, my friend. Love, Debi
