Loves Doorway.
You can't have one without the other.18 total reviews
Comment from Haylee Hemphill
Hello!
This is simple and elegant. Thank you for sharing! I hope you continue to share your work with our community and others. Best of luck!
One Love
Haylee
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Hello!
This is simple and elegant. Thank you for sharing! I hope you continue to share your work with our community and others. Best of luck!
One Love
Haylee
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Thank you, Haylee. We've all been there and done that. The pain goes away but the memories linger.
All the best, Yard.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 10 Word Poem writing prompt contest. Good word count.
Spring is well known for new beginnings. I'm glad you found your perfect one.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Excellent entry for the 10 Word Poem writing prompt contest. Good word count.
Spring is well known for new beginnings. I'm glad you found your perfect one.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Thanks, Gypsy. Poetry is like love; you win some and lose some. The pain goes away but the memories linger.
All the best, Yard.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed the tone and sentiment of this poem.
The artwork is a perfect choice as it mirrors
the mood of your writing. You did a great
job with the prompt, very creative.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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I enjoyed the tone and sentiment of this poem.
The artwork is a perfect choice as it mirrors
the mood of your writing. You did a great
job with the prompt, very creative.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Finding love can bring such joy to hearts and soothe the soul, I can identify with your words here, I wish you luck with the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Finding love can bring such joy to hearts and soothe the soul, I can identify with your words here, I wish you luck with the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from R56Ma3
A very good description of a new love beginning and overcoming a failed relationship. An enjoyable read and hope things work out well. Thank you for sharing. R56ma3:Susan C.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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A very good description of a new love beginning and overcoming a failed relationship. An enjoyable read and hope things work out well. Thank you for sharing. R56ma3:Susan C.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you, R56Ma5. It is much appreciated.
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You're welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-I like your title and appreciate your notes.
-You have used your ten words well
showing different emotions in a relationship.
-Good transition with "Then" separating
the not so good qualities with the positive ones.
-Very good concluding lines show how a
relationship can be.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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-Nice image and presentation.
-I like your title and appreciate your notes.
-You have used your ten words well
showing different emotions in a relationship.
-Good transition with "Then" separating
the not so good qualities with the positive ones.
-Very good concluding lines show how a
relationship can be.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you so very much for your in-depth review and positive voice.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from LisaMay
I like the simply expressed delight in your poem, that having said goodbye to a painful past, new love can promise forever happiness when you step through that doorway. The world loves an optimist!
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reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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I like the simply expressed delight in your poem, that having said goodbye to a painful past, new love can promise forever happiness when you step through that doorway. The world loves an optimist!
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you so very much for your in-depth review and positive voice.
Comment from jessizero
This is a great poem in ten words. Goodbye hurts, but it doesn't stay the focus of our lives. We eventually say a new hello. Thank you for sharing this here.
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reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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This is a great poem in ten words. Goodbye hurts, but it doesn't stay the focus of our lives. We eventually say a new hello. Thank you for sharing this here.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you Jessi, so very much for your in-depth review and positive voice.
