Only One Place for Me
Life Lessons; Where do you get yours from?39 total reviews
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
I enjoyed your poem. The rhythm and rhyme seem to stutter a bit, but I think if you spaced it differently so it's easier to see where lines end, it would help to read it with the proper beat.
I don't know much about the occult, but in my mind it can be helpful to interpret one's own thoughts in a different way. I don't know if there is evil in it, but there are many thoughts about that.
Good poem, easy to find your theme, and interesting premise.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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I enjoyed your poem. The rhythm and rhyme seem to stutter a bit, but I think if you spaced it differently so it's easier to see where lines end, it would help to read it with the proper beat.
I don't know much about the occult, but in my mind it can be helpful to interpret one's own thoughts in a different way. I don't know if there is evil in it, but there are many thoughts about that.
Good poem, easy to find your theme, and interesting premise.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks so much Sam. And I love your advice and will change that, as I have tried so many ways to make it smooth and wrinkle free. So that is truly appreciated. And I do agree that this may not be the same threat for all people, yet the person who was possessed was definitely believing and taking it all to heart and then it absolutely becomes the devil's playground. some just aren't that easily influenced . Thank you so much Sam for the awesome review and wonderful feedback.
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Sam, would you go check out the changes I made on this poem.
I am so very grateful that you said something as I have been under the weather, so I knew something didn't feel right to me and I think it looks better. Thank you my friend!
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Oh, that makes it very much better! The look of it, and the rhythm of it as well. I'm glad you prettied it up - you will find people much more likely to read and review now. Great!
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You are awesome my friend!
I owe you one!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Only One Place for Me, definitely puts the kibosh on following the suggestions of tarot cards when prayer and listening to God's direction makes miracles happen.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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This poem, Only One Place for Me, definitely puts the kibosh on following the suggestions of tarot cards when prayer and listening to God's direction makes miracles happen.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Satan has a way of stretching the leash that God has him on; especially when we are playing in his playground....And thank you for your very kind review and comments. Much appreciated my friend!
Comment from June Sargent
You are so wise in turning away from Satan's playground. None of the options he offers are real or dependable when it comes to knowing our future. If we want to know what the future holds, look to God's Word and trust in His guidance. Narrow is the road leading to life and few are the ones finding it, whereas broad is the road leading to destruction. We can't follow the crowd...
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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You are so wise in turning away from Satan's playground. None of the options he offers are real or dependable when it comes to knowing our future. If we want to know what the future holds, look to God's Word and trust in His guidance. Narrow is the road leading to life and few are the ones finding it, whereas broad is the road leading to destruction. We can't follow the crowd...
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Satan definitely has a way of stretching the leash that God has him on; especially when we are playing in his playground....You nailed it with many of your comments. So thank you for your very kind review!
Much appreciated my friend!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Anytime, anyone can bear a testimony not only strengthens themselves but gives hope that it will affect someone else because if we don't, as you have written, Satan's crones will be hard at work. Very nicely written.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Anytime, anyone can bear a testimony not only strengthens themselves but gives hope that it will affect someone else because if we don't, as you have written, Satan's crones will be hard at work. Very nicely written.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Tom, that means a lot to me. Thank you so much for the very kind words!
Comment from Boogienights
A very nicely written and interesting poem. It gives you food for thought thats for certain. It might do well to rethink your life and take stock. This poem does a great job in relays this message. Thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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A very nicely written and interesting poem. It gives you food for thought thats for certain. It might do well to rethink your life and take stock. This poem does a great job in relays this message. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks Hon, I don't mean to sound like a prude I had a ouija board as a kid, but back then people didn't realize that it invites evil spirits in. And I'm not saying not to read your horoscope or whatever, but never take them serious. I have seen first hand what happens when demons take over and she is no longer here. Thank you for the lovely review and kind words. It's much appreciated! Debi
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent entry for the Life Lessons contest. You are right - such things as horoscopes, tarot cards and the like are very deceptive. God warned us about such things for good reason. I am keeping my eye on the prize too. His calling.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Excellent entry for the Life Lessons contest. You are right - such things as horoscopes, tarot cards and the like are very deceptive. God warned us about such things for good reason. I am keeping my eye on the prize too. His calling.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks Wendy, I don't mean to sound like a prude I had a ouija board as a kid, but back then my parents didn't realize it invites evil spirits in. And I'm not saying not to read your horoscope, but never take them serious.
(l haven't looked at one of those in 30 years) I have seen first hand what happens when demons take over and she is no longer here. Thank you for the lovely review and kind words. It's much appreciated!
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Comment from Haylee Hemphill
I have stumbled across this yet again and it is still as beautiful as ever. I really enjoy your work. You will always have a fan!
One Love
Haylee
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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I have stumbled across this yet again and it is still as beautiful as ever. I really enjoy your work. You will always have a fan!
One Love
Haylee
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks again Haylee!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Look how many people are born under one month of horoscopes. And those people need to wake up. One prediction for all those people has never made sense to me. The older you get, the wiser you get. And as you said, God is the only one who knows our birth chart, from infancy to death. Thank you.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Look how many people are born under one month of horoscopes. And those people need to wake up. One prediction for all those people has never made sense to me. The older you get, the wiser you get. And as you said, God is the only one who knows our birth chart, from infancy to death. Thank you.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks Carolyn, I don't mean to sound like a prude I had a ouija board as a kid, but back then my parents didn't realize it invites evil spirits in. And I'm not saying not to read your horoscope, but never take them serious.
(l haven't looked at one of those in 30 years) I have seen first hand what happens when demons take over and she is no longer here. Thank you for the lovely review and kind words. It's much appreciated! Debi
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I was at a friend's house in 1977, and they pulled out an Ouija board. And I know what you are talking about. I wished I had never participated. Not only did it reveal secrets about me, but a few evil things happened to me not long afterwards. I was 24 at the time. And I would freak out now, if I saw one. No more of them are allowed around me. Pure Evil.
Comment from Marienkiefer
A very lovely poem that offers as a reminder of faith in our life.
-Great comparisons and contrasts.
-There a lot of distractions and imposters, your poem seems to say clearly to me.Only one higher being.
Thank you for sharing these beautiful thoughts.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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A very lovely poem that offers as a reminder of faith in our life.
-Great comparisons and contrasts.
-There a lot of distractions and imposters, your poem seems to say clearly to me.Only one higher being.
Thank you for sharing these beautiful thoughts.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks Marien, I don't mean to sound like a prude I had a ouija board as a kid, but back then my parents didn't realize it invites evil spirits in. And I'm not saying not to read your horoscope, but never take them serious.
(l haven't looked at one of those in 30 years) I have seen first hand what happens when demons take over and she is no longer here. Thank you for the lovely review and kind words. It's much appreciated!
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
My Mother would read her stars in the newspaper every day and I think she really believed it too. Tomorrow is a mystery and cannot be predicted but our own determination in life can shape our future and the rest is left to God, much enjoyed Debi, love Dolly x
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My Mother would read her stars in the newspaper every day and I think she really believed it too. Tomorrow is a mystery and cannot be predicted but our own determination in life can shape our future and the rest is left to God, much enjoyed Debi, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks Dolly, I don't mean to sound like a prude I had a ouija board as a kid, but back then my parents didn't realize it invites evil spirits in. And I'm not saying not to read your horoscope, but never take them serious.
(l haven't looked at one of those in 30 years) I have seen first hand what happens when demons take over and she is no longer here. Thank you for the lovely review and kind words. It's much appreciated!
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