Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Good luck for what it is worth. God has answered all our prayers but men and women no longer seek the answer in the Good Book. I cannot think of any problem unaddressed in those gold pages. As you wrote there are so many how does He hear. For what it is worth, that's my two cents. Of course, misguided thoughts will find alibi's and state emphatically that was then and the world has changed. Comparing Sodom and Gomorrah to life today erase that dictate.

 Comment Written 03-May-2022

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reply by the author on 03-May-2022

Thank you for your insightful comments. I really appreciate that you took the time to read my poem. :)

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

A very beautiful poem about God. Faith comes from God so if you believe in Him, He will understand. We have to have faith in our family too besides trusting them.

 Comment Written 02-May-2022

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reply by the author on 03-May-2022

Thank you, you have a good perspective on things. I appreciate this great review. :)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the "My Faith writing prompt" contest. You explained your faith clearly and it was easy to follow....nice flow.

I know what you mean about faith. I love my family very much. They are the best part of my life.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-May-2022

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reply by the author on 03-May-2022

Thank you this thoughtful review, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Sarah Tummey

Excellent

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. My favourite line is: "I wish just once I'd see God" because it reminded me of Thomas in the Bible, who said unless he saw the nail marks in Jesus' hands, he wouldn't believe in Him. Jesus appeared and showed Thomas the marks from the nails. Then He said: "You believe because you have seen Me. Blessed are those who believe without seeing Me".

 Comment Written 02-May-2022

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reply by the author on 03-May-2022

Thank you for reading my poem and for your insightful comments. :)

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This poem demonstrates faith well.

In rhyming poetry it is as well not to use the same rhyme more than once in any one poem unless it is a very long one. You have the 'oo' sound a couple of times and the me/see rhyme is also repeated.

'but there's questions I have to.' >> I think that final 'to' should be 'too' meaning also or as well.

 Comment Written 02-May-2022

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reply by the author on 02-May-2022

Thank you for this nice review and your helpful suggestions. I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from zanya

Excellent

A very interesting and engaging poetic reflection here on the question of Faith and how we experience it in our daily, earthly lives - believing in a God most of us never see

 Comment Written 02-May-2022

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reply by the author on 02-May-2022

Thanks for this great review and for your insightful comments. :)

Comment from Maria Millsaps

Excellent

This was a very nice heartfelt poem, that many can relate to. Family indeed is very important and that's why God made them. Just think he could had just made us of clay and breathed into us, and bingo, a human race. But he knew family was important and that's why the first family failed miserly. They did not have a family. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 01-May-2022

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reply by the author on 02-May-2022

Thank you for this insightful review.. I really appreciate you reading my poem.:)

reply by Maria Millsaps on 02-May-2022

Welcome

Comment from Haylee Hemphill

Excellent

Hello!

I love this poem. It is very relatable for me. Your words are moving. It's okay for your faith to lie in your family. I hope you continue to share your work with our community and others.

One Love
Haylee

 Comment Written 01-May-2022

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reply by the author on 02-May-2022

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. :)