Twilight Dreams
12 word poetry9 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
You took the twelve-word challenge and created a lovely rhyming couplet! I really liked "wisps of twilight dreams" and the lavender streams is clearly seen in that picture! Congratulations on the second place win!
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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You took the twelve-word challenge and created a lovely rhyming couplet! I really liked "wisps of twilight dreams" and the lavender streams is clearly seen in that picture! Congratulations on the second place win!
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you so very much, Helen. I am spending days out in the garden planting and reorganizing my flowers ... mainly hostas... I have great plans for my deck and have finished planting my window boxes this week. It is always something. Thanks again, my friend.
Melissa
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Sounds lovely! 💖
Comment from dragonpoet
Melissa,
What a beautiful piece of aretwork to illustrate your words. It alsmost seems to be ekphrastic. It is a good use of twelve words to show how nature's beauty inspires writing.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writng and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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Melissa,
What a beautiful piece of aretwork to illustrate your words. It alsmost seems to be ekphrastic. It is a good use of twelve words to show how nature's beauty inspires writing.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writng and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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Thank you very much Joan!!
Melissa
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You are most kindly welcome, Melissa.
Joan
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Streams of lavender could be about a stream of lavender flowers. They could grow in sprays...the blossoms can flow like the waves and dance as people are daydreaming about their beauty.
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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Streams of lavender could be about a stream of lavender flowers. They could grow in sprays...the blossoms can flow like the waves and dance as people are daydreaming about their beauty.
Comment Written 04-May-2022
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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Thanks so much, Rosemary!
Comment from LisaMay
An added bonus for me in appreciating your delicately descriptive words is that I recognise that tree's location. I have photographed it several times myself as it is only a few hours away from where I live in southern new Zealand. It is on the shores of Lake Wanaka. It is a willow tree.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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An added bonus for me in appreciating your delicately descriptive words is that I recognise that tree's location. I have photographed it several times myself as it is only a few hours away from where I live in southern new Zealand. It is on the shores of Lake Wanaka. It is a willow tree.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Oh wow, I am so glad you shared that with me Lisa. Thanks for telling me about it... you live in an amazing country between these types of scenes and that crazy kea bird you wrote about. Thanks.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent twelve word poem and entry for the contest
with very good descriptive imagery and the nice addition of the rhyme.
Perfect match to the photograph.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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This is an excellent twelve word poem and entry for the contest
with very good descriptive imagery and the nice addition of the rhyme.
Perfect match to the photograph.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks so much Robert!
Comment from R56Ma3
What a lovely poem to describe a clear and starry evening. I liked it so much that I had to read it twice. Very relaxing and thank you for sharing. R56ma3:Susan C.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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What a lovely poem to describe a clear and starry evening. I liked it so much that I had to read it twice. Very relaxing and thank you for sharing. R56ma3:Susan C.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you Susan.
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You're welcome
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You're welcome
Comment from Haylee Hemphill
Hello!
I love the vibe and energy I get from this poem. You have a well written piece for only 12 words. I wish you the best with your submission. Thank you for sharing!
One Love
Haylee
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Hello!
I love the vibe and energy I get from this poem. You have a well written piece for only 12 words. I wish you the best with your submission. Thank you for sharing!
One Love
Haylee
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks so much Haylee!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Perfect passion in purple describes your vvid entry. Your matched illustration and verse are a nice combination.
Best wishes in the contest voting.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Perfect passion in purple describes your vvid entry. Your matched illustration and verse are a nice combination.
Best wishes in the contest voting.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks so much, Mark!
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned and illustrated poem in an economy of words. I see a winner here, mystery poet, and wish you all the best in the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Beautifully penned and illustrated poem in an economy of words. I see a winner here, mystery poet, and wish you all the best in the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks so much sweet Sal!
