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A World of Equal

Heaven

44 total reviews 
Comment from Beri Bee
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Reading this poem caused a great big sigh. It's just beautiful! Welcome home, indeed. In a world where inequality and hatred seem the default setting, what heaven this would be. Thanks for the reminder. It almost leaves me speechless. (Sorry I didn't have any 6 stars left.)

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 07-May-2022
    Hi Beri, please don't worry about the six stars...
    just your review is more than worth it my sweet friend...

    just believe...stay in faith...and trust God knows
    what He is doing...we are all in His master plan...
    and he never loses a fight...

    Thank You sweet girl for a wonderful review...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by Beri Bee on 08-May-2022
    Thank you, Linda, for your lovely encouraging words!
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
    your so very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Haylee Hemphill
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Hello!

I can not wait for the peace this will bring. Heaven will be so much better than this crazy world we live in now. I just wish everyone could get along. I wish we all saw colored blind too. Thank you for sharing and awesome job!

One Love
Haylee

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 07-May-2022
    Hi Haylee, Thank You my sweet friend for a wonderful
    review...I feel like you do...I wish people would stop
    the hating...and live in peace...enough...

    thank you...and you are so welcome sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That is wonderful, Linda, and I ask my self, why isn't it like that on God's world? Why do we disrespect all He gave us? All colours are His colours, why do all the cultures believe, theirs is the right one? They are all right, if only poeple would open their eyes and see what God sees. It's good to believe that it will all be right in Heaven. Well done, my wonderful friend, you see what is right. Love you loads, and sending a humongous hug! xxxxx Sandra xx

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 07-May-2022
    Hi Sandra, I think there are people who say
    they believe in God...think God doesn't know He
    created different colors...God likes different...
    He did it with languages as well...

    I wish people on earth would just stop hating...
    it would be awesome to live in peace...sigh...

    it's all about greed...and control...and people
    need to understand...there is only one who is in
    total control here...God...and I don't think it will
    be to far down the road...His going to make that clear...

    Thank You my amazing friend for an awesome review...
    sending you so many bunches of love you...and the biggest hugs...
    God Bless...Linda xxoo
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
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Thank you for this short poem with an important message. I didn't understand the last line until I read the author note. Also not sure about "colored blind". . .did you mean "color blind"....? I think removing the "ed" would make the line smoother and not change the meaning.

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 07-May-2022
    Hi K, it's not color blind the poem is talking about...
    color blind is you see everything the same color...gray...

    colored blind is...you see everyone the same color...
    their eye sight is the color of blind... COLORED blind...
    the last line...welcome home...Heaven...that's how most people
    se Heaven...as home...eternally...Thank you...Linda xxoo
reply by K. Lang-Slattery on 08-May-2022
    Thanks for clarifying this.
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
    your so very welcome...xxoo
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Linda, with the world in chaos, your poem is very timely. People are arguing and being difficult even when there is no need to do so...they just want to be disruptive. I especially liked:

last stop, welcome home
(Yes, our Heavenly Father will welcome us home, but wouldn't it be nice if Man could treat the World and each other as if today were the last day of their life...each and every day...because one day, it will be.)

Well chosen photo. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer




 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 07-May-2022
    Hi Margaret, it's how so many are saying...
    why can't people stop the hate and anger here...
    get a long with their neighbors...this is crazy
    what is happening here my sweet friend...

    Thank You for a wonderful review...I hope you are doing well...
    God Bless...Love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from dragonpoet
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Linda,
If everyone would be color blind and religion blind then their would be no groups like the Neo nazis or KuKlux Clan. This world would be easier to bring to peace.
Keep writing and staying healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 08-May-2022
    Hi Joan, your so right my sweet friend...
    I wish we did have peace here...sigh...

    Thank you for a wonderful review...
    and you take care and stay healthy as well...love you...
    Linda xxoo Happy Mother's Day...
reply by dragonpoet on 08-May-2022
    You are most kindly welcome, Linda.
    Joan
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
    smiling big...love xxoo
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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A World of Equal
by l.raven

Hello. Linda. An awesome poem about equality in heaven. I agree with you. Good 5/7/5 syllables count and connection between lines. Lovely presentation

Love you

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 08-May-2022
    Hi Gypsy, Thank you my sweet friend for a
    wonderful review...so glad you like it...

    you have a great evening...and stay healthy...
    Happy Mother's Day...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Shirley McLain
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A very insightful poem you created. You did an excellent job, and I enjoyed reading it. The picture was spot on, perfect with your poem. Do you find your pictures before you write or after? Have a great afternoon. Shirley

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 08-May-2022
    Hi Shirley, some of them I find before...
    and some I find after...

    Thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...
    stay healthy...and have a great evening...Happy Mother's Day...
    love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Lilly Flowers
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I agree with your sentiments. A soul is a soul and the body we use when we're here on earth is just the shell. You did a good job using such a small amount of words to convey an important message. Best regards, Lilly

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 08-May-2022
    Hi Lilly, Thank You sweet girl for a
    wonderful review...I'm so glad you like it...

    take care and stay healthy...
    Happy Mothers day...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Sally Law
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Thank you for this lovely short verse poem! God made color because He likes variety, nothing more. He looks upon the heart, not on the outside.

Sending you my best today as always, dear Linda,
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 08-May-2022
    Hi Sally, Amen my sweet friend...when our time
    comes...our shells will go to dust...it is our
    hearts...our spirits...Jesus is coming for...

    Thank you for a wonderful review you...
    take care...and Happy Mother's Day...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by Sally Law on 09-May-2022
    Ready for the rapture! Xoxo's