A World of Equal
Heaven44 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is not skin I notice when I meet someone, it is who they are and how they behave, and I have grown up thinking that everyone thinks like that but it is not the case. A fine write Linda, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
  |
It is not skin I notice when I meet someone, it is who they are and how they behave, and I have grown up thinking that everyone thinks like that but it is not the case. A fine write Linda, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
-
Hi Dolly, I know just what your saying...I went through the
better part of my adult life with people being respectful...
it wasn't until after my husband passed...I saw a part
of life I never want to see again...I never knew anyone like that...did you ever ask yourself...what was I thinking???...
love makes us do things crazy things...
I never have notice the skin of a person...it has always been
through their hearts...
Thank You for a wonderful review my sweet friend...
take care and stay safe...Happy Mother's Day...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Never thought of it this way, but an extreme case of color blindness would begin to put us on equal ground. Nice thought and poem - picture compliments subject.
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
|
Never thought of it this way, but an extreme case of color blindness would begin to put us on equal ground. Nice thought and poem - picture compliments subject.
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
-
Hi Pam, Thank You sweet girl for a wonderful review...
I'm so glad you like it...
take care...and Happy Mother's Day...
love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Linda.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem about equality.
-I like the second line about how
"we all see colored blind."
-A very good closing line, too.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
|
-Nice artwork and presentation, Linda.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem about equality.
-I like the second line about how
"we all see colored blind."
-A very good closing line, too.
-Well done.
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
-
Hi Pam, Thank You so much my sweet friend for
a wonderful review...
that is how people should be seeing each other...
all the same...we are all God's creations...
and He doesn't love one color more than the other...
and expects the same of us...
take care and stay safe...Happy Mother's Day.
love you...Linda xxoo
-
You are welcome, Linda, and I agree with you. Hope you had a good Mother's Day, too.
Comment from Wendy G
Love the theme and like you, I am looking forward to heaven with peace and unity and no status based on colour or looks or class. You have offered a thought provoking poem for all.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
|
Love the theme and like you, I am looking forward to heaven with peace and unity and no status based on colour or looks or class. You have offered a thought provoking poem for all.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
-
Hi Wendy, I just wish my sweet friend...
we could have peace here...sigh
Thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...
God Bless...and take care...Happy Mother's Day...
love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from royowen
What a wonderful world where we all never saw the colour of the skin, but only the love of God for the dear souls Jesus died for Linda, beautifully written my friend, lovely sentiment, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
|
What a wonderful world where we all never saw the colour of the skin, but only the love of God for the dear souls Jesus died for Linda, beautifully written my friend, lovely sentiment, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
-
Hi Roy, Thank You my sweet friend for a wonderful review...
I wish we could have peace here on earth...people would
stop all the hate...sigh...
take care and God Bless sweet guy...love Linda xxoo
-
Welcome
Comment from Jane Jane King
I like your idea and message very much. I played around with it and wanted to make some suggestions. Hope you don't mind.What would you think of this?
Equality equals
Multi colored flowers
One beautiful garden
Welcome to Paradise.
I enjoyed this piece very much
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
 |
I like your idea and message very much. I played around with it and wanted to make some suggestions. Hope you don't mind.What would you think of this?
Equality equals
Multi colored flowers
One beautiful garden
Welcome to Paradise.
I enjoyed this piece very much
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
-
Hi Jane, thank you for your help...
but that would change the entire poem...
my poem speaks of people seeing everyone
all the same color...no racism...all people see is
the color of blind...
Than You...love Linda xxoo
Comment from LisaD123
This is a very interesting theme for a haiku. The contrast of the third line helps to give the poem a sense of power. The image is very well-chosen and, as is so often with these short poems, gives an extra layer of meaning and context. Thanks for sharing such an entertaining piece.
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
|
This is a very interesting theme for a haiku. The contrast of the third line helps to give the poem a sense of power. The image is very well-chosen and, as is so often with these short poems, gives an extra layer of meaning and context. Thanks for sharing such an entertaining piece.
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
-
Hi Liza, Thank You so much sweet girl
for a wonderful review...I am so glad
you like it...and you are so very welcome...
God Bless...and Happy Mother's Day...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Cass Carlton
Yes, it will be wonderful, won't it? There won't be any language barriers either, which will also bring more wonders to the status quo.
Everyone will trust each other, children will be rosy cheeked and polite and clean and well fed. Stop! Stop now before I do something rash. I just got waylaid for a moment there. Thinking about the Kingdom that is to come, with all its peace and joy, is a bit much for this weary heart sometimes, so I'll content myself with knowing that it will be there when the time comes. In His own good time, Linda, not ours, but His. Your posted words ring true, my dear, and the artwork is "Spot on". Well chosen. cheers Cass
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
 |
Yes, it will be wonderful, won't it? There won't be any language barriers either, which will also bring more wonders to the status quo.
Everyone will trust each other, children will be rosy cheeked and polite and clean and well fed. Stop! Stop now before I do something rash. I just got waylaid for a moment there. Thinking about the Kingdom that is to come, with all its peace and joy, is a bit much for this weary heart sometimes, so I'll content myself with knowing that it will be there when the time comes. In His own good time, Linda, not ours, but His. Your posted words ring true, my dear, and the artwork is "Spot on". Well chosen. cheers Cass
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
-
Hi Cass, we all have to trust God knows what He's doing...
this is all His master plan...and we are all in it...good and
evil...and He will deal with them in His own time...and us...
always so good to see you beautiful girl...
Thank you for your awesome review you...and for all your lovely
stars...
it seems Cass these days I think more about what Heaven will
be like...what it will be like to live in peace...it's a dream
come true my sweet friend...sigh...well...I'm off to bed you...
Thank You again...sending much love your way...Linda xxoo
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'A World of Equal ' , is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
|
'A World of Equal ' , is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 04-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
-
Hi Duchess, Thank You sweet lady for
a wonderful review...it is so good to see you...
I hope you are doing well...love you...Linda xxoo
Hi Linda, you're very welcome my possum. I'm fine and hope you're the same... love you too...the Duchess xxoo
-
I am fine as well...winter is about to come
to a close...but the rain just keeps coming...
I have so much I want to do outside...so I hope next week is drier...are you cold or hot
where you are???...love xxoo
In Australia, my possum and close to freezing love ooxx
-
Hi sweet lady, think I've had enough of freezing...looking forward to hot/warm...LOL...I knew you were in Australia...I meant...are you cold or hot...
which one...LOL...love ya you...xxoo
Hi Linda my possum. Freezing is enough to do me in xxoo :)))
love ya too
the Duchess
-
smiling right back at ya...
love xxoo
I can feel it zapping through cyberspace ... ooxx...
the Duchess
Comment from nomi338
Believe it or not, the Bible has prophesied the very same thing for the earth after the battle of Armageddon. Not everyone is going to live in heaven. There will be a multitude of people living here on the earth and they will get along with each other, without any prejudice at all.
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
|
Believe it or not, the Bible has prophesied the very same thing for the earth after the battle of Armageddon. Not everyone is going to live in heaven. There will be a multitude of people living here on the earth and they will get along with each other, without any prejudice at all.
Comment Written 04-May-2022
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
-
Hi Nolan, so good to see you sweet guy...
that would be wonderful my sweet friend...
I just wish I could wake up one morning...
and read...peace has come throughout the world...
I pray for always...sigh...Thank you so much for
wonderful review...I am honored you dropped by...love Linda xxoo
