Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

The choice of the word 'woos' I perfect for the sense of ooooh. The use of alliteration is effective. And the s's effect the silence of the moment. The kissing sound can be heard here too. Well orchestrated.

 Comment Written 07-May-2022

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reply by the author on 08-May-2022

I appreciate the positive review ... Those critters are so cute , I couldn't resist writing a wee poem about them.

Keep safe!

reply by Liz O'Neill on 08-May-2022

***smile***

Comment from Jayne Renolds

Good

So this is cute and I was not prepared. Though I think the poem itself couldn't have stood on its own without the pictures it is still really cute and I liked it. It was certainly a day brightener.

 Comment Written 06-May-2022

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reply by the author on 06-May-2022

I?m am glad my entry put a smile on your face. Mission accomplished then!

When I found the pics , I couldn?t resist using them. ( biggrin)

Keep safe!

Comment from R. Marc Goodson

Good

Cute! I loved the 'photo-story.' The poem was very well written and clearly relates to the photo series. The only suggestion I would have made would be to drop out the word 'their;' it would have better rhythm and rhyme. However, this is a contest submission and makes it impossible to do that. Well done!

 Comment Written 06-May-2022

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reply by the author on 06-May-2022

Glad you enjoyed my wee poem..

I thought the pics were cute to so I decided to use them

I was under the impression that until the deadline is not reached, a poem can be edited..

Am I wrong?

reply by R. Marc Goodson on 06-May-2022

As a reviewer, I simply take the ones that pop up in order, or skip them. I chose to read this one.

reply by the author on 06-May-2022

I was referring to that fact you said my poem would flow better without the ?their?.

But then you added :

However, this is a contest submission and makes it impossible to do that.


So I thought you were saying I can?t edit my poem once I post.

Anyway , thanks for choosing
To read my entry.

Keep safe!