Three precious mothers
A blessing for ...19 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Mother's Day--5-8-2022 writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well. Your poem moves along smoothly and clearly.
I know how you feel, I love my daughters and daughters in-law very much. I'm grateful I have them.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Excellent entry for the Mother's Day--5-8-2022 writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well. Your poem moves along smoothly and clearly.
I know how you feel, I love my daughters and daughters in-law very much. I'm grateful I have them.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. Much appreciated. Yes they are all so precious.
Wendy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a lovely poem about your family (daughters, and daughter-in-law). You have shown them much respect, love, and togetherness as a family. Very sentimental value, also.
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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What a lovely poem about your family (daughters, and daughter-in-law). You have shown them much respect, love, and togetherness as a family. Very sentimental value, also.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Thank you Rosemary. So glad you enjoyed it.
Wendy
Comment from Bill Schott
This twelve-line poem, Three Precious Mothers, directed at the family daughters and daughter-in-law, acknowledges their commitment to God and their kids. Nice.
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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This twelve-line poem, Three Precious Mothers, directed at the family daughters and daughter-in-law, acknowledges their commitment to God and their kids. Nice.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Thank you Bill for your thoughtful words. Always value your reviews.
Wendy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely Mother's Day tribute to your daughters and daughter-in-law, Wendy, beautifully written from your heart. Good luck in the contest,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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This is a lovely Mother's Day tribute to your daughters and daughter-in-law, Wendy, beautifully written from your heart. Good luck in the contest,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Thank you so much Valda. I so appreciate your lovely review, and also the gift of six stars, which I count an honour. Thanks too for the good wishes.
Wendy
Comment from LisaMay
I am sure the attributes of being 'diligent and caring' were passed on by you as a mother to your daughters and witnessed by your daughter-in-law. Your poem shows that it is clearly very satisfying for you to see this dedicated behaviour modelled by them to their children. Mothers are so influential, as is the Bible.
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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I am sure the attributes of being 'diligent and caring' were passed on by you as a mother to your daughters and witnessed by your daughter-in-law. Your poem shows that it is clearly very satisfying for you to see this dedicated behaviour modelled by them to their children. Mothers are so influential, as is the Bible.
Comment Written 08-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Thank you very much Jenny. Lovely review. Yes they are so influential, I hope and pray mine remember the good - not the time I chased one around the dining table brandishing the wooden spoon!!!
Wendy
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The image of you chasing a child
around the dining table with a wooden spoon made me laugh. I hope it was a big table for the child's sake, to give your anger time to subside. My mum and dad employed the threat of the wooden spoon at the dining table itself if etiquette rules were breached - a rap across the knuckles. It became a game of reflexes - pretending to reach across to grab things then quickly withdrawing as the spoon descended.
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Lol. Yes it was a big table - and I never got her! This was the most compliant child of the three - I can't remember what she did to upset me so much!
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Triggered by something forgettable.
Comment from dragonpoet
Wendy,
This is a nice poem for. what I am guessing. are your three daughters which are now mothers themselves.
I like the artwork and the chosed font color.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writng and stay heatlhy
Joan
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Wendy,
This is a nice poem for. what I am guessing. are your three daughters which are now mothers themselves.
I like the artwork and the chosed font color.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writng and stay heatlhy
Joan
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you Joan. Yes, two daughters and a daughter-in-law, all precious. Thank you too for your good wishes, appreciated also.
Wendy
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You're welcome on both accounts, Wendy.
Happy Mother's Day.
Joan
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great response to the writing prompt. It makes me happy that you are blessed with two lovely daughters and a wonderful daughter-in-law. A very nice tribute and celebration, Wendy.
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Great response to the writing prompt. It makes me happy that you are blessed with two lovely daughters and a wonderful daughter-in-law. A very nice tribute and celebration, Wendy.
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you Tim for a super review. Much appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Wendy
Very nicely expressed for Mother's Day. It's like dominoes. A good mother makes good mothers who make good mothers.
My favorite verse,
"A blessing for you, three mothers dear
Honoured at this time of year
Mothers of four girls, three boys ...
Bring so much love and daily joys"
This should be a contender in the contest. Good Luck!
Hugs,
Kimbob
& Happy Mother's Day!
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Hi Wendy
Very nicely expressed for Mother's Day. It's like dominoes. A good mother makes good mothers who make good mothers.
My favorite verse,
"A blessing for you, three mothers dear
Honoured at this time of year
Mothers of four girls, three boys ...
Bring so much love and daily joys"
This should be a contender in the contest. Good Luck!
Hugs,
Kimbob
& Happy Mother's Day!
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your super review, both thoughtful and encouraging! I also appreciate your good wishes greatly.
Wendy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I wish I had a 6! This is an exceptionally lovely, expressive poem. It's obvious that these three young ladies are worthy of your praise! Your primary wish is movingly conveyed--that they lead their children in a way that guides them to the Lord.
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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I wish I had a 6! This is an exceptionally lovely, expressive poem. It's obvious that these three young ladies are worthy of your praise! Your primary wish is movingly conveyed--that they lead their children in a way that guides them to the Lord.
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Thank you so much Janice. Yes, that is my dearest wish. Nothing matters more than that. What a lovely review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I do understand this poem even though I only had boys. I am truly blessed with three amazing daughter-in-laws who are exactly what each of my son's needed. My oldest son's wife, Nicole, needed to be an extremely strong lady, who was capable of keeping my opinionated son in his place. He is capable of standing up for herself. LOL My next son's wife, Crystal, needed to gentle and nurturing to keep her husband calm. He's extremely ADHD. Next comes Katie. She needed to be extremely intelligent, yet have a silly side, to meet my son's intelligence, yet help him to loosen up and not be serious all the time. All of them are Godly women and parents. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I do understand this poem even though I only had boys. I am truly blessed with three amazing daughter-in-laws who are exactly what each of my son's needed. My oldest son's wife, Nicole, needed to be an extremely strong lady, who was capable of keeping my opinionated son in his place. He is capable of standing up for herself. LOL My next son's wife, Crystal, needed to gentle and nurturing to keep her husband calm. He's extremely ADHD. Next comes Katie. She needed to be extremely intelligent, yet have a silly side, to meet my son's intelligence, yet help him to loosen up and not be serious all the time. All of them are Godly women and parents. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Oh wow that?s wonderful. I am sure their choices of wives were guided by the Lord via your prayers. Super review. Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it too.
Wendy
