Lonely
A woman in a relationship with a drunk.4 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !
Living with a drunk will eventually kill even the strongest of bonds.
So why stay?
She hangs on mainly because the thought to be suddenly alone scares her more than living in a loveless relationship.
If they had kids, she might actually find the courage to leave for their sack.
Ciao!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Ciao !
Living with a drunk will eventually kill even the strongest of bonds.
So why stay?
She hangs on mainly because the thought to be suddenly alone scares her more than living in a loveless relationship.
If they had kids, she might actually find the courage to leave for their sack.
Ciao!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you for reading and rating my poem. Sadly, you said a mouthful of truth with this statement~She hangs on mainly because the thought to be suddenly alone scares her more than living in a loveless relationship. Many women and men stay hoping for better soaked in alcohol.
Comment from karenina
Welcome and congrats on your debut poem.
A sad reality for so many. Love does not die as easily as people think. Loneliness is a glue holding many a fractured relationship together.
Karenina
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Welcome and congrats on your debut poem.
A sad reality for so many. Love does not die as easily as people think. Loneliness is a glue holding many a fractured relationship together.
Karenina
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Amen to the sentiments you expressed. Thank you for reading and rating my poem.
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It was a pleasure to read your work...
Comment from lyenochka
Hi and welcome to Fanstory! So glad you entered this contest. I think you did a great job in creating a picture of the lonely narrator for us in just these three lines. One thing that the contest requires is it " must address a loved one." So you might want to edit so it addresses the husband.
Best wishes!
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Hi and welcome to Fanstory! So glad you entered this contest. I think you did a great job in creating a picture of the lonely narrator for us in just these three lines. One thing that the contest requires is it " must address a loved one." So you might want to edit so it addresses the husband.
Best wishes!
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Thank you for your kind words of support. I am a new member.
Comment from BeckyMann
It is such a simple poem and yet it carries SO MUCH meaning. I really enjoyed it, although it made me quite sad, which I personally think means it was very, very good. Good luck with your writing.
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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It is such a simple poem and yet it carries SO MUCH meaning. I really enjoyed it, although it made me quite sad, which I personally think means it was very, very good. Good luck with your writing.
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Thank you for your kind words of support. I am a new member.
