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Paraskevidekatriaphobia

I scream, you scream, we all scream for 13

12 total reviews 
Comment from Julcia
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A delightful read. I scream............for 13
A witty, sophisticated poem , no, no
A fun read, in which one squirms
Trying to taste drippy,juicy words. Julcia

 Comment Written 29-May-2022


reply by the author on 30-May-2022
    You make it sound so succulent, lol :-). Thanks so much - this one was fun to put together.

    Mike
reply by Julcia on 30-May-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
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Impressive definition of "Paraskevidekatriaphobia" which the Fanstory dictionary doesn't even know. I only knew "Triskaidekaphobia" but am glad to know the very specific phobia name. Congratulations on the win!!


 Comment Written 18-May-2022


reply by the author on 18-May-2022
    I knew there was a word for it, but had to look it up to see whether I could make a poem out of it!
Comment from Beri Bee
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Thank you for this most fun read about a mythical numerically charged day. Your poem is chock full of delicious pairings and phrase coining. You've even included a smart little double entendre! Among my favorites are 'scavenge dignity,' 'overthinking shivers,' and 'imabically contained.' It's a fridge keeper... high compliment here!

 Comment Written 14-May-2022


reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    Thanks so much, Beri :-). I sometimes take things too far, but I love playing with words to the point they sometimes become tongue (and mind) twisters. I'm really happy you enjoyed this!

    Mike
reply by Beri Bee on 14-May-2022
    *iambically

    You made it very fun!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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Well, it sounds like you have any Friday the 13th qualms contained and conquered. I have never heard the word 'para...' whatever before, but now I will know what it is and what it means, though I will probably never use it in casual conversation.

Nicely done.

 Comment Written 14-May-2022


reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    Haha, thanks Gary - that would be a pretty weird conversation :-)

    Mike
Comment from Bill Schott
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This twelve-line, free verse about Friday the Thirteenth, Paraskevidekatriaphobia, is well-rounded as it includes the subject matter, and the way it is captured within the rules of poetry framing.

 Comment Written 13-May-2022


reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    Thanks, Bill - much apprecaited.

    Mike
Comment from L. Kalere
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Yay, a humorous and clever approach to a contest. Great wordplay, and of course I had to hit the dictionary to see if you were pulling my(our) leg(s). I can't remember a Friday the 13th without a twinge of trepidation. Fun to read? Yes indeed.

By the way, I suffer from Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia, so this was a challenge.

Linda


 Comment Written 12-May-2022


reply by the author on 13-May-2022
    I could write you a scary story about antidisestablish- Nah, I won't go there. Thanks so much for your lovely review :-)

    Mike
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your contest entry is well presented. FF. I enjoyed reading it.
I like the color scheme and your word choices. Your words flow
smoothly with good imagery. I like the word that begins para. . .
the last line.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 12-May-2022


reply by the author on 13-May-2022
    Thank you, Jan. I had a lot of fun writing this :-).

    Mike
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Welcome back!!! I've missed your posts but see you haven't lost any of your writing talent. I was not away that there was a fear of Friday 13th. It makes sense though. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us.

 Comment Written 12-May-2022


reply by the author on 12-May-2022
    Aww, thank you :-). I can't believe it's 8 years since I was posting regularly. Good to see some names I recognise are still in the mix!

    Mike
reply by barbara.wilkey on 13-May-2022
    I can't believe it's been 8 years since you left. I'm really happy you've returned.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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As one who's going to my granddaughter's graduation tomorrow, I'm glad to say that Friday the 13th is just another day to me--BUT some have that irrational fear you have so descriptively addressed.

 Comment Written 12-May-2022


reply by the author on 12-May-2022
    Thankfully, It's not one that bothers me either, but it was fun to write about! Many thanks for your kind words.

    Mike
Comment from Eliz T.
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I read it twice just because there seemed like there was a lot squeezed into this poem. I honestly haven't hears of this fear before, so thanks for the info and intro to something I didn't know existed!

 Comment Written 12-May-2022


reply by the author on 12-May-2022
    I sometimes feel I could pick up something random from my desk and someone, somewhere will be terrified of it! Many thanks for the review :-)

    Mike