Limericks 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Just Yolking Around"A book of limericks
15 total reviews
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Debra,
First of all, I like the title... "Just Yolking Around". Good play on words!
I'm betting Meg's last name is Dumpty. Am I right??? Humpty Dumpty's sister?
This is a fun 8-8-5-5-8 limerick with a slight touch of naughty. I love a girl who isn't afraid to show off her legs.
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Hi Debra,
First of all, I like the title... "Just Yolking Around". Good play on words!
I'm betting Meg's last name is Dumpty. Am I right??? Humpty Dumpty's sister?
This is a fun 8-8-5-5-8 limerick with a slight touch of naughty. I love a girl who isn't afraid to show off her legs.
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Glad you enjoyed the read, Kimbob!
I appreciate your feedback :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Sarah Tummey
Brilliant!
This was a great one to post
On a day that suits it the most;
You have a good grasp
On making us laugh,
So make your reward egg on toast!
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Brilliant!
This was a great one to post
On a day that suits it the most;
You have a good grasp
On making us laugh,
So make your reward egg on toast!
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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5 stars to you for your on-point reply!! Love it!
Thanks so much, Sarah, for making me smile with your fun feedback.
I'm glad you enjoyed the read :) Perhaps I WILL make myself eggs on toast for dinner!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from nomi338
If getting a laugh was her intent
No law would be broken or bent
But if too much was shown
Into jail she would be thrown
And away all laughter is sent.
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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If getting a laugh was her intent
No law would be broken or bent
But if too much was shown
Into jail she would be thrown
And away all laughter is sent.
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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LOL! Thank you so much for your playful feedback - I give you 5 stars for creativity and effort!
Best wishes, Debra :)
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Thank you for allowing my silliness to share a platform with you.
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Any time! :)
Comment from Sally Law
Oh dang, I missed it! Life has called me away at present. Thank you for the great Limerick. This is so much fun. Kinda cheeky....
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Oh dang, I missed it! Life has called me away at present. Thank you for the great Limerick. This is so much fun. Kinda cheeky....
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Glad you enjoyed the read, Sal :) Hope all is well with you...x
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Haha! This is a cheeky limerick you've written and I love it. The picture of "Meg, stuck in an egg" is perfect here. Always enjoy your poetry, as I know I will read something well thought out, nicely rhymed and well written. Have a great writing weekend!
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Haha! This is a cheeky limerick you've written and I love it. The picture of "Meg, stuck in an egg" is perfect here. Always enjoy your poetry, as I know I will read something well thought out, nicely rhymed and well written. Have a great writing weekend!
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Pam, for your kind and encouraging feedback. I'm happy you enjoyed the read :) Best wishes as always Debra x
Comment from Mama Baer
Ah, what fun! And a happy limerick day to you, Debra. So fun to read a piece from you again. This is adorable. I love a good limerick, and this is a great one! Sending lots of good wishes.
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Ah, what fun! And a happy limerick day to you, Debra. So fun to read a piece from you again. This is adorable. I love a good limerick, and this is a great one! Sending lots of good wishes.
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Hi Mama Baer :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and generous star rating :) I appreciate both and I'm happy you enjoyed the read! Hope you're well, following April's challenge - I've not read you since..... get writing!!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from karenina
Limericks are such fun! I saw Robyn's reminder but my muse is apparently on strike.
No worries, though!
I can still enjoy your eggciting little gem!
I wonder, was she recreating a Hungry Dumpty scenario?
Cute!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Limericks are such fun! I saw Robyn's reminder but my muse is apparently on strike.
No worries, though!
I can still enjoy your eggciting little gem!
I wonder, was she recreating a Hungry Dumpty scenario?
Cute!
Karenina
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Hah! Thanks for your lovely feedback, Karenina :)
Glad you enjoyed the read... she does look a little humpydumpty-esque sat on that wall!
Best wishes always, Debra x
Comment from Gloria ....
Absolutely love this Limerick in celebration of the Day. You have the limerick metre and rhyme written to perfection, and with just a wee bit of the leg flashing, I think this meets the form's requirements very nicely.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Absolutely love this Limerick in celebration of the Day. You have the limerick metre and rhyme written to perfection, and with just a wee bit of the leg flashing, I think this meets the form's requirements very nicely.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thanks so much, Gloria :) Glad you enjoyed the read! I had fun writing it! Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Thanks for sharing the limerick for National Limerick Day! And since the cheeky chick had lovely long legs, I guess it was fine to show them off! Time for her to hatch.
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Lol! Thanks for sharing the limerick for National Limerick Day! And since the cheeky chick had lovely long legs, I guess it was fine to show them off! Time for her to hatch.
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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LOL! Thanks for your fun feedback, Helen :) Glad you enjoyed the read... Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is hilarious Debra, well rhymed and metered with just the right amount of humour. Limericks are not easy to write and yours is magical and funny, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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This is hilarious Debra, well rhymed and metered with just the right amount of humour. Limericks are not easy to write and yours is magical and funny, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Hi Dolly :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and generous star rating - I appreciate both and I'm glad that you enjoyed the read :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
