Limericks 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Just Yolking Around"A book of limericks
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a smooth-reading limerick, that is rather humorous, and certainly matches your photo perfectly. Were you thiking of chicken as a term for a young woman, or did the term for an old woman's skin (arm especially) cross your mind when you wrote this?
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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This is a smooth-reading limerick, that is rather humorous, and certainly matches your photo perfectly. Were you thiking of chicken as a term for a young woman, or did the term for an old woman's skin (arm especially) cross your mind when you wrote this?
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Hi Kate :) Thanks for your feedback - glad you enjoyed the read!
I was definitely thinking young, rather than old ;)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Teri7
Debra, This is a very cute and well written limerick you have penned for Limerick Day. You used very cute and good descriptive words with very cute imagery from the picture you chose to use. Thank you for sharing and for the smile today! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Debra, This is a very cute and well written limerick you have penned for Limerick Day. You used very cute and good descriptive words with very cute imagery from the picture you chose to use. Thank you for sharing and for the smile today! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Teri, for your lovely feedback :) Glad you enjoyed the read! Best wishes, Debra
Comment from royowen
What a very clever Limerick with a really inspirational piece of artwork to back it up. Written in very well coordinating language and syllable count of 88558, well done, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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What a very clever Limerick with a really inspirational piece of artwork to back it up. Written in very well coordinating language and syllable count of 88558, well done, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Roy :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
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Most welcome
Comment from jessizero
I was unaware but am wholeheartedly in favor of National Limerick Day! Your limerick was cute, and the picture complemented it well. Thank you for sharing your gift once again.
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reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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I was unaware but am wholeheartedly in favor of National Limerick Day! Your limerick was cute, and the picture complemented it well. Thank you for sharing your gift once again.
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Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Jessi :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Fleedleflump
I'd say, for limericky flow, you'd be better dropping the word 'young' from the first line. Other than that, I thought it was fun and entertaining, with the little bit of cheek a limerick needs.
Mike
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I'd say, for limericky flow, you'd be better dropping the word 'young' from the first line. Other than that, I thought it was fun and entertaining, with the little bit of cheek a limerick needs.
Mike
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Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much for your feedback, Mike :)
Best wishes, Debra
